Ok heres the next bit of my script. Comments and critques please. If you can think of a joke I can put in please tell me.
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Scene 2
(The screen starts off as blank and small slits off scenery open up and close again as though eyes were opening and closing.)
(Only a small part of the screen should not be black and a blurry form of a pear and a peach should be seen)
(both strange voices should be done in clock crew voices.)
Strange voice 1 “ Is it dead?”
Strange voice 2 “ I don’t think so. It seems to be waking up. What should we do with it?”
Strange voice 1 “ I say we take it to our King and let him decide”
Strange Voice 2 “ Good idea. Lets take him to strawberry clock and let him decide………maybe we should knock him out again?”
Strange voice 1 “ Why the hell not?”
(a loud Crack is heard and the screen fades to black again.)
Scene 2
( This scene opens in the same way as the other except in stead of a peach and a pear the blurred from of a strawberry is seen.)
Strawberry clock “Wake up you lazy bum Or I will kick you………..so you wont wake up then….fine.”
Bedn “Ouch. What was that for?”
SC “ For being a lazy bum. Now get up!”
( the view changes and Strawberry clock is seen to jump onto a throne as Bedn gets up.)
Strawberry Clock “ Who are you and why did my Royal guards find you in the Hunting forest?”
Bedn “ ummmmmm…….Forest? Guards? waiit a second……….you’re a strawberry!”
SC” I am not just any strawberry impudent fool! I am Strawberry clock! King of the portal!”
Bedn “Strawberry clock? What is this some kind of weird dream?”
Sc “ No this isn’t a dream. You are in my palace in the clock crew lands in the land of Flash.”
Bedn” The land of Flash? What the hell.”
SC” hmmmmmm I see you are a stranger here come I will show you my kingdom”
(Strawberry walks off screen and Bedn follows, The view changes to a corridor with various pictures on the wall)
( pics include pic of Bedn and wade, and various pictures from the web cam page)
SC “ Tell me strnager what is you name?”
Bedn “ My names Josh….but you can call me Bedn.”
SC “ Hmmm a strange name you have come let us go meet my people.”
(The View changes to the entrance of a grand palace with arches and stained glass windows and tapestries hanging on the walls)
SC “ Behold my kingdom!”
(The view changes and a number of small huts are see with various clocks walking around minding their own business.)
Bedn “errrrrrr……it looks more like a village than a kingdom.”
( the view changes back to the palace front)
SC “ Currently yes but my plans to expand are well under way. As soon as my shrine to B is built we will make new homes and school for the little baby clocks .”
Bedn “ Shrine to B?”
SC” Yes my Shrine to B. Come I will show you it.”
(The scene changes and we see Bedn and Strawberry Clcok entering a large temple like building., The scene changes again and we see a large Capital B surrounded by scaffolding.)
SC “ This is it! Be awed and amazed at my shrine to B!”
Bedn “ But its just a giant capital B?”
SC “ You don’t understand do you? B Is our God. We worship him thrice daily in the hope that he will bless us.”
( a peal of bells is heard)
SC” It is worshipping time. Watch our ceremony if you wish but remain quiet.”
( Clocks of various type sensate shrine and Strawberry Climbs up a ladder to a platform.)
SC “ ALL HAIL B!!!!!”
CLOCKS “ BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE”
SC “ Today we come in worship of out God B!”
CLOCKS “ BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE”
SC “ B has blessed us in the past with fine children good crops and amazing flash skills”
CLOCKS “ BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE”
SC “ We shall now take time to pray to B.”
One clock “ BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE”
( there is an awkward silence and then the only non clock in the group hits him)
SC “ Thank you J00bie. As a reward we will build a shrine to K for you to worship at.”
J00bie “ Your to kind your majesty.”
SC “ Now to continue with our prayers……….what is that falling out of the sky?”
( a large house is seen falling out the sky and everyone aprt from j00bie moves out of the way.)
J00bie “Oh shit”
( the house falls on top of J00bie with a loud crash. )
SC “Alas poor J00bie we hardly new you”
(view changes to Kyle and Stand from south park.)
Kyle “ OH MY GOD! HE KILLED J00BIE!”
Stan “ YOU bastards”
( a cackling laugh is heard)
Voice “ MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! Strawberry clock! Let this be a lesson toy ou. Next time you don’t pay tribute to me I will drop a house on you.”
SC “ God damn you Tanner. Why must you take away the people I love! First you killed Nepthys, then Pox power and now you kill J00bie….If it wasn’t for my cowardice I would have my revenge!”
( view changes to Bedn)
Bedn “ ummmmmmm….can I go now?”
Sc “ The only way home is to speak to the wizard of flash. If your going to see him I will come too. He will tell you how to get home and will give me the courage to defeat Tanner, the wicked witch of the west”
Bedn “ ummmmmmmmm……….ok? Well how do we get to this wizard of flash?”
SC “ We follow the IP Address road?”
Bedn “ Follow the IP addres road?”
Clocks “ Follow the IP Address road?”
(Strawberry starts to sing)
SC “ were off to see the wizard
the wonderful wizard of flash.
We hear he is a wonderful wiz
Who makes flashes with class.
(The rest of the clocks join in as SC and Bedn are seen walking down the Ip address road.)
