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First Stick Animation Critque

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First Stick Animation Critque 2017-03-17 23:09:44


Hey ya'll,

So recently I've finished my first stick figure battle in adobe flash. First animation altogether actually.

It's 10 seconds long and the running is a little choppy and so are the arm movements. I'm using pose to pose animation but I'm not sure if I have too many frames or not enough in betweens....

Video in question: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Ew2vCojaBY&feature=youtu.be

thanks

Response to First Stick Animation Critque 2017-03-19 03:09:28


Scratch the last link, updated animation here:

The sounds are off but I did a lot more easing and some vcam stuff.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xJzHNoy-pvo

Response to First Stick Animation Critque 2017-03-21 14:22:23


Try and put more impact into the aggressive motions. Right now the motion looks too gentle.