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Phoenix. 2017-03-04 19:16:41


This place has become a wasteland. The bleeding has stopped, but the leech is still nursing. This city was once a hearth - a cradle to the imagination, but soon saw its occupants turn ravenous wolves. It's governing body was destined to fall and this new breed hunts in packs. The black hole of a failed society devoured itself. The citizens traveled by number as their mother eats her young. Everything seemed so serene at one point, maybe alluding to the calm before the storm. The imagination turned to a lack of focus and attention spanned into a lack of self. Their renaissance was over and their only spark of light was a lit match. Through crumbling bricks and the roar of flames over the ambulance sirens echoed a desire to burn the city to the ground.

Silence crept over the skyline as the ashes wilted new beginnings. The once feral citizens began living in harmony. Necessity however, soon groped their throats. Life without order taught them they couldn't live without freedom. Trust became paranoia, as they realized their possessions must be protected. It began with their kids - the most basic possession. Something to be protected the most. If there's no security in a child's future, there maybe no future at all. This is the most elementary instinct - Individual Survival.

To overcome this, they sought protection. Leadership. Some of the masses proclaimed themselves as messiahs, teaching moral values to their herds. Others disagreed, shunning those teachers and punishing those who followed. They insurrection them, proving that gang mentality can overcome any ideal preaching.

Some of the masses disagreed. They built shrines to teach others their short lived heritage. Those who disagreed were once again shunned and developed their own followings. They created a dichotomy in clans based on belief. As their society progressed, those who congregated together became predominate. All else were hidden in the background, using soap boxes as their altars. The few began a movement to denounce those in power.

Ideas became groups. Groups became cults. Cults became religions until the minorities soon had an army awaiting their counters. Those once discarded by their peers began to rise. Those once crawled began to stand. They find that power consumes those in power. Their society once again falls.

The ouroborous continues ingesting itself.

This place has become a wasteland.

Response to Phoenix. 2017-03-05 14:54:41 (edited 2017-03-05 14:57:41)


Music Has three Major Componets.

1.Harmony which is mostly your singing or words and poetry
2.Mealody which is mostly your horns and stringed instruments
3.Percussion which is your rythem and drums beats

Your sir are losing ground because you want chaos rather mealody and percussion, your civilization is falling to wasteland yet a teenage waste land is what they've sung of since the eighties...

I would suggest you feed your people with a mealodic guitar rather than a chaotic gangster rap, and include a counter gun effect like a bell in your percussion as long as you have chao's in you harmony or words it will always be as if your words hold no traction, and Kenny Rodgers put it best when he wrote the wrote the words of the song.. "you got to knw when to hold the you got to knw when to fold them, and you got to knw when to just get up and walk away you better count your blessings on sunday morning cause that's when you friends are going to be there..

let your mouth rest in peace and read your bible rather than spunk mouth communist porn that is on trial along with the f word get it got it good.


James 4:6 6But he gives us more grace. That is why Scripture says: "God opposes the proud but shows favor to the humble."