At 1/6/17 01:12 PM, tomek wrote:
you cant draw
Oi that's not constructive at all lmao
Anyway; looking at this specific piece, I'd say the biggest problem is your fundamentals. It's outta proportion. I don't just mean realistic, anatomically correct kind of proportions, but just consistency in general.
At this moment, I'd personally recommend two things:
-First and foremost: focus on improving your fundamental construction and proportions, as to see the entire form of the drawing before you even add details. Artists usually don't just draw the head/body shape outright unless it's purely instinctive to them at that point (even then I wouldn't recommend ever doing that). Jazza and Sycra are two artists who's YouTube channels provide a lot of stuff to help out the gate, so I extremely recommend, that if you do nothing else, just check out some of their videos, as there's many other things I can tell you but they can actually show you.
-Secondly, if you want to do quality pinup style NSFW stuff, your anatomy and proportionality will have to be extra on point. Characters won't have clothes or anything obscuring stuff and mistakes will be more glaringly obvious to the viewer, significantly hurting the attractiveness of the image; so, try getting down more correct anatomy after, or while, focusing more on your fundamentals (construction and proportions), first.
Trust me, dude, improvement always takes time, and it's a struggle, but it's pretty fun ^^