JULNEN - Inside a Mirror [Alt.Rock]

[theofficialJULNEN]

hey!
I'm a new artist from Brazil. Been on activities since 2012 when I released my debut EP. I have many influences from alternative rock and metal with sub genres of symphonic, industrial, electronic and also progressive.

I love Muse, 30 Seconds to Mars, girügamesh, MUCC, and many other artists.

Currently I've been recording my debut album, Devil In Me which is a story of a human that was abandoned, a monster awakes in his heart and starts to spread his evil words, send people to war just for revenge and then finally see his empire going down with him as the people starts turning their backs. It's basically a fall of a human, rise and fall of a monster.

Four chapters were released during the year. Chapter 1: Uprise, Chapter 2: Wrath, Chapter 3: Kingdom and the recent release of Chapter 4: Downfall this month along with my first official music video.

I want to know if you guys like it.
Heres's the link to the audio: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/698073?updated=1470844883
Here's the link to the official music video: https://youtu.be/wOI5l0tteM4

I appreciate a good criticism, if constructive. A musician is always learning from his mistakes. :)
Thank you very much for your time.

Ps: i'm knew to the forum, so I don't know how to properly shorten the URL to a simples LINK.