So my character suffers from true forced loneliness, he has no friends, he asked 20 girls out and they all rejected him. His family ignores him, belittles him, he writes poems and plays piano he's really sweet and people view him as your typical nice guy or just say he's a week person who can't defend anyone because he looks so innocent in the face and he's short. He like cries in public and doesn't understand why kids at school ignore him.
Is this guy weak and pathetic?
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At 6/21/16 09:10 PM, BonemanCharles wrote: yeah
also there is a writing forum, bud
No one seems to care about why he's like this..
Yeah, you are weak and pathetic.
Oh wait, I meant him.
At 6/21/16 09:10 PM, Ishmaelist wrote: Not weak and pathetic enough. Give him a 1 inch dick
I'm giving him a bigger one.
What the fuck is "true forced loneliness"
At 6/21/16 09:18 PM, Monster64 wrote: Yeah, you are weak and pathetic.
Oh wait, I meant him.
Why must I be Insluted? I know you don't like me, you don't have to insult me.
At 6/21/16 09:22 PM, Kayleeee wrote: What the fuck is "true forced loneliness"
Sounds like solitary confinement to me.
A truly prophetic sig...
It's okay to make your character have weaknesses. That's what makes them relatable! But if you're going for some sort of tragedy-themed story, I think you have make double-sure that all their weaknesses and flaws are relevant, make sense, and don't tip over to the point of sounding comical.
At 6/21/16 09:22 PM, ZE13 wrote:At 6/21/16 09:18 PM, Monster64 wrote: Yeah, you are weak and pathetic.Why must I be Insluted? I know you don't like me, you don't have to insult me.
Oh wait, I meant him.
Happens regularly on the bbs. If youre easily insulted then maybe NG is not suitable for you. And yes, there is a forum dedicated to writing only and people there are more likely to respond seriously
At 6/21/16 09:06 PM, Loki wrote: is your character you?
Woah
No need to be that savage
Thanks for the sig Homi even if you're a Homicidee
At 6/22/16 01:06 PM, Centaurora wrote:At 6/21/16 09:06 PM, Loki wrote: is your character you?Woah
No need to be that savage
Yes he is me.
At 6/22/16 02:26 PM, ZE13 wrote:At 6/22/16 01:06 PM, Centaurora wrote:Yes he is me.At 6/21/16 09:06 PM, Loki wrote: is your character you?Woah
No need to be that savage
The mystery has been revealed!
It's all shits and giggles until someone giggles and shits.
At 6/21/16 09:06 PM, ZE13 wrote: So my character suffers from true forced loneliness, he has no friends, he asked 20 girls out and they all rejected him.
Since you've admitted that it was you, I'm just gonna say this: They probably rejected you because you either barely knew them and tried asking them out, or you seem to self loathe yourself and they don't see you as strong dating material.
At 6/21/16 09:06 PM, ZE13 wrote: So my character suffers from true forced loneliness, he has no friends, he asked 20 girls out and they all rejected him. His family ignores him, belittles him, he writes poems and plays piano he's really sweet and people view him as your typical nice guy or just say he's a week person who can't defend anyone because he looks so innocent in the face and he's short. He like cries in public and doesn't understand why kids at school ignore him.
This sounds like a story that tumblr/reddit would totally eat up and want to make an anime out of.
At 6/21/16 09:06 PM, ZE13 wrote: So my character suffers from true forced loneliness, he has no friends, he asked 20 girls out and they all rejected him. His family ignores him, belittles him, he writes poems
Dose he write agony inspired poems?
"خيبر خيبر يايهود جيش محمد سوف يعود"
At 6/23/16 09:33 AM, satanbrain wrote:At 6/21/16 09:06 PM, ZE13 wrote: So my character suffers from true forced loneliness, he has no friends, he asked 20 girls out and they all rejected him. His family ignores him, belittles him, he writes poemsDose he write agony inspired poems?
Yes he does. He writes about all kinds of things. Here's one I write for him.
I bear a great sadness that I hide too well, but then again I don't hide it- people hide from me.
Or something like that.
At 6/21/16 09:06 PM, ZE13 wrote: So my character suffers from true forced loneliness, he has no friends, he asked 20 girls out and they all rejected him.
Did he try asking them all out at the same time? That's a common mistake I used to make all the time.
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