I'm just starting a thread so I can compile all my pages for the comic book I've been making. Maybe a bit of discussion. I'm going to start with the character concepts.
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(Basically I illustrated an event further into the story ahead of time)
Ok I really like where you're going with this, BUT the character with the striped sweater looks like noah from that slenderman tribletwelve series. The little shadow demon hing he's got is interesting, i'm not sure if you want to use the horns, but I feel it's a bit overdone. But this is the begining so you might put a fresh perspective on horned stuff.
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At 3/23/16 06:54 PM, linda-mota wrote: Ok I really like where you're going with this, BUT the character with the striped sweater looks like noah from that slenderman tribletwelve series. The little shadow demon hing he's got is interesting, i'm not sure if you want to use the horns, but I feel it's a bit overdone. But this is the begining so you might put a fresh perspective on horned stuff.
I see the resemblance, I'm not sure that's a disadvantage. Maybe since it's set in a forest, people might draw the slenderman connection. I haven't even thought about that haha.
The horns aren't there for visual embellishment, they actually stand for something. You'll see in the later pages what these things actually connote, I wouldn't want to spoil the story. Thanks for the input! Cheers!
At 3/26/16 07:15 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Cover Art
Truely beautiful cover. Great work here so far overall.
Welcome back.
At 3/26/16 07:20 AM, Luwano wrote: Truely beautiful cover. Great work here so far overall.
Welcome back.
Whoa! Luwano I missed you buddy!
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At 3/29/16 11:12 AM, LuckyLightTitan wrote: Very awesome comic.
Keep it up!
Thank you!
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At 4/2/16 11:55 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Page 7
Damn!!!
I haven't seen this comic-y style from you, this is super sweet. I love the cover especially. Great work, keep it up!
At 4/2/16 09:30 PM, Spags wrote: Damn!!!
I haven't seen this comic-y style from you, this is super sweet. I love the cover especially. Great work, keep it up!
Thanks a lot spags!
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And the suspense continues as i eagerly wait for the next page.
Page 10. Life got in the way of progress.
At 4/8/16 11:18 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: Page 10. Life got in the way of progress.
YEAH looking great so far! cant wait for the continuation >v<
At 4/8/16 11:44 AM, Kosuk wrote: YEAH looking great so far! cant wait for the continuation >v<
thanks!
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At 3/23/16 04:08 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: I'm just starting a thread so I can compile all my pages for the comic book I've been making. Maybe a bit of discussion. I'm going to start with the character concepts.
Your comic looks cool so far. Have you considered posting it on a web comic site like tapastic?
At 4/10/16 04:25 AM, anthchem wrote: Your comic looks cool so far. Have you considered posting it on a web comic site like tapastic?
No I haven't to be honest. Maybe after I finish everything.
Panel preview to page 12.
I really love this black and white and very clean style!! cant wait for the next page!
At 4/11/16 10:40 AM, V1KK1 wrote: I really love this black and white and very clean style!! cant wait for the next page!
Thanks!
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Love this comic. Some really great shots. Love the crowd panel on page 12. The composition is brilliant.
Interesting choice to make stripe shirt/socks for the characters. I found that very appealing. Maybe because it became a canon to make so different characters, that this design look natural. And the overall organic feel from the inking and rendering is great. Would like to see more of this.
At 4/11/16 09:54 AM, Fifty-50 wrote:
Panel preview to page 12.
love the panel too.
You've got me curious with the street sign...., is there a story behind it..., I wonder?? (*inside thinking)
At 4/15/16 06:53 PM, HugoTendaz wrote: Love this comic. Some really great shots. Love the crowd panel on page 12. The composition is brilliant.
Interesting choice to make stripe shirt/socks for the characters. I found that very appealing. Maybe because it became a canon to make so different characters, that this design look natural. And the overall organic feel from the inking and rendering is great. Would like to see more of this.
Thanks Hugo! The design actually has a meaning to it. It will become more apparent once we reach a certain number of pages.
At 4/16/16 02:00 PM, Akuaitance wrote: love the panel too.
You've got me curious with the street sign...., is there a story behind it..., I wonder?? (*inside thinking)
Thank you! Yes there definitely is something about the street sign that relates to the male character.
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"They told me to smile and I did, but some things just never work.
Looking really good so far Fiddy! Especially that panel with the crowd!
Drawin' and being trash. :3
