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judge my intro (storyboard)

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judge my intro (storyboard) 2016-02-19 17:19:30


Just spent the afternoon storyboarding my new intro thing for my videos.
Just wanted your thoughts on how it could be improved, e.g. animation, what could be added, too long, too short etc.

Note- this is only a storyboard the drawings aren't final and color will be added.

judge my intro (storyboard)

Response to judge my intro (storyboard) 2016-02-19 19:23:19


At 2/19/16 05:19 PM, TMC-n-G wrote: Just spent the afternoon storyboarding my new intro thing for my videos.
Just wanted your thoughts on how it could be improved, e.g. animation, what could be added, too long, too short etc.

Note- this is only a storyboard the drawings aren't final and color will be added.

I think you can add more 'weights' to your characters by adjust the timing. For example when he jumped, the landing time will be faster. When he landed, it can be slow down alittle.

The length of the animation is alright for a intro. If you can put in sound effects, it will make a whole lot different.


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Response to judge my intro (storyboard) 2016-02-19 20:46:20


I'm not entirely sure what is happening. Try developing your silhouettes and timing more.

At 2/19/16 05:19 PM, TMC-n-G wrote: Just spent the afternoon storyboarding my new intro thing for my videos.
Just wanted your thoughts on how it could be improved, e.g. animation, what could be added, too long, too short etc.

Note- this is only a storyboard the drawings aren't final and color will be added.

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Response to judge my intro (storyboard) 2016-02-19 21:35:57


At 2/19/16 07:23 PM, Black-Crystal wrote:
I think you can add more 'weights' to your characters by adjust the timing. For example when he jumped, the landing time will be faster. When he landed, it can be slow down alittle.

The length of the animation is alright for a intro. If you can put in sound effects, it will make a whole lot different.

Yeah I agree about that jump looking a little weak, ill probably adjust that section

Response to judge my intro (storyboard) 2016-02-19 21:40:18


At 2/19/16 08:46 PM, maficmelody wrote: I'm not entirely sure what is happening. Try developing your silhouettes and timing more.

Thanks for the advise this is very rough just trying to figure out what frames I'm going to have but I guess I should try to have fairly clean silhouettes. I also agree the timing isn't great it's something I have been trying to work on for a while.