Hey everybody! I'm Snazznasty, I'm new to Newgrounds and I was hoping for some feedback on this Big Daddy from Bioshock.
First piece of art I've done and looking for constructive criticism. I know the pose is a little weird but overrall pretty happy for a first try. Thanks!
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Done. Still hoping for some critique, although even just some acknowledgement would be appreciated. Not really happy with it, but whatever, it's my first piece.
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At 9/24/15 11:23 AM, Snazznasty wrote: Hey everybody! I'm Snazznasty, I'm new to Newgrounds and I was hoping for some feedback on this Big Daddy from Bioshock.
First piece of art I've done and looking for constructive criticism. I know the pose is a little weird but overrall pretty happy for a first try. Thanks!
You spelt overall wrong you potato
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At 9/24/15 11:23 AM, Snazznasty wrote: Hey everybody! I'm Snazznasty, I'm new to Newgrounds and I was hoping for some feedback on this Big Daddy from Bioshock.
This thread is to be the home of any awesome/terrible things I create/try to create and any abominations I might produce in the process.
First piece of art I've done and looking for constructive criticism. I know the pose is a little weird but overrall pretty happy for a first try. Thanks!
I don't know who created the human race, but they're a fucking idiot.
HATE MAIL HERE: Snazznasty@gmail.com
I don't know who created the human race, but they're a fucking idiot.
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Sorry for reposting the same piece of art with improvements - this is the last one, and it won't happen again.
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Some fanart of Binding of Isaac. Probably my biggest, most complicated piece so far. On a side note, I haven't gotten many replies to this thread. Am I doing something wrong, or is it just a matter of noone taking interest? Either way hope you enjoy the art.
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Trying to do humanoid figures as much as possible, because i think i need to improve my anatomy and perspective as the poses often look odd. This started out as a grim reaper but became something completely unrelated so now it's more of a steampunky plague doctor thingo.
Not Happy with the scythe arm, the rest is better than usual.
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WIP Kratos from God Of War. Did it mainly to practice muscles, I think they came out okay.
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Haven't posted in a while... This is my reaction to finding Broforce fanfiction.
And not the family friendly kind.
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I don't know who created the human race, but they're a fucking idiot.
HATE MAIL HERE: Snazznasty@gmail.com
I don't know who created the human race, but they're a fucking idiot.
HATE MAIL HERE: Snazznasty@gmail.com
I don't know who created the human race, but they're a fucking idiot.
HATE MAIL HERE: Snazznasty@gmail.com
I don't know who created the human race, but they're a fucking idiot.
HATE MAIL HERE: Snazznasty@gmail.com
Just would like to say that I'm open to reviews and critique and in fact would appreciate them a lot.
Destroy me.
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At 11/15/15 03:11 PM, Leeland wrote: Hi. I feel bad that you have no real replies yet, so here is one for you.
I can see definite improvement from the first to the latest image, so well done. What I would like to see is you spending more time on one piece and creating a more cleaner final image. I figure that the sketchy look is part of your style, but at the moment it seems a bit too scratchy. Try to tidy it up a bit while retaining that sketchiness.
Keep at it.
Thanks heaps for the reply, general consensus seems to be that they are too messy and sketchy.
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At 11/15/15 09:44 PM, EKM wrote: As standalone art pieces, they don't work for me. I'm not really a fan of the style either and it looks like something that belongs in those wacky flash animations. It looks too washable marker-ish if that makes any sense. There's too much clutter and colour. I think you should polish up on the details on other parts of the body to make them look more defined (rather than just the muscles) and kind of back away from the thick colours. Keep drawing and improving on anatomy. I like your choice of characters.
Thanks for replying!
With the style, fair enough, I see what you're saying. I guess I need to work on making it more polished and less cluttered. By thick colors and washable marker, do you mean that the colors are blocky and not blended? Or that it's too colorful?
Either way, thanks for being honest.
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Welcome to newgrounds
Your work is not too bad it looks pretty different and I like the idea of what you present.
~X~
At 11/17/15 03:31 PM, XwaynecoltX wrote: Welcome to newgrounds
Your work is not too bad it looks pretty different and I like the idea of what you present.
~X~
Thanks man :D really means a lot to someone who just started art ( compared to many of the people on here who have been doing it for years)
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