https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W2uTkfcEigvQAT1LZRcC6SUGKXgC7A2XwtkyerMJoDM/edit?usp=sharing
Can I get some feedback please.
I was definitely smiling and had a sensible chuckle at all the right points in the script, but it feels unfinished. I could easily see another trailer or two getting progressively worse, with more audience members killing themselves. By the time the movie they actually went to go see comes on, our hero is relieved, thinking he survived...and then you drop the biggest, worst possible movie. Food for thought!
At 7/19/15 07:24 PM, LDAF wrote: I was definitely smiling and had a sensible chuckle at all the right points in the script, but it feels unfinished. I could \
your basically saying its horrible..
At 6/18/15 10:01 PM, Blounty wrote: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W2uTkfcEigvQAT1LZRcC6SUGKXgC7A2XwtkyerMJoDM/edit?usp=sharing
Can I get some feedback please.
this is not formatted correctly either.
At 7/25/15 07:21 PM, ZE13 wrote:At 6/18/15 10:01 PM, Blounty wrote: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W2uTkfcEigvQAT1LZRcC6SUGKXgC7A2XwtkyerMJoDM/edit?usp=sharingthis is not formatted correctly either.
Can I get some feedback please.
It's pretty much formatted exactly as most guides say except I added extra cues for voice actors to work from.
Please go on and tell me more about how it is wrong though.
At 7/25/15 07:20 PM, ZE13 wrote:At 7/19/15 07:24 PM, LDAF wrote: I was definitely smiling and had a sensible chuckle at all the right points in the script, but it feels unfinished. I could \your basically saying its horrible..
Huh? When did I say that? The script fulfills its purpose, I just feel like there should be more content, that's all.
