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Feedback on first page of comic

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Feedback on first page of comic 2015-06-04 15:23:31


Ok, so I've finished the first page of a comic I'm doing called The Adventures of Titan. I'd just like some feedback on it to help me with the rest of it. Any help would be much appreciated.

Feedback on first page of comic

Response to Feedback on first page of comic 2015-06-04 17:48:28


Well, first of all, spellcheck.


A distant engine of hate is stirring....

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Response to Feedback on first page of comic 2015-06-04 22:35:48


The strong warrior looks kinda wimpy... Get some basics down, check out perspective, anatomy, structure and design videos out on youtube! There's a lot out there to learn :)

Response to Feedback on first page of comic 2015-06-05 06:43:30


Thanks for the feedback. I'll have another go at that last frame.