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Critique my explosion!

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Critique my explosion! 2015-05-23 04:09:31


This is my first explosion animation done on Adobe flash professional cs6 with a wacom intuos pen and touch.
I need feedback and criticisms to help me make better quality animations.

Critique my explosion!

Response to Critique my explosion! 2015-05-23 12:27:58


Animating effects are not easy. Though I'm not the best guy for giving advice on the design, but I can say animation-wise, the timing is too evenly spaced. I suggest to work on your ease-in's / out's.

Plus, (okay this might be the only design advice) the explosion should not look too symmetrical from the start.