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Hi, I created a game, and I translated their dialogues in English, but I need a native person to supervise if I translated them properly. Beware, there are different endings. Here you go:

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TIP: Move your character with your mouse and destroy enemies' core.

"Great job, Fluttershy!
Can you bring me more Energy Crystals, please?"

TIP: Survive for 29 seconds.

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"I finally found you, murderer.
Countless monsters are dead because of you, and I will avenge them."

CHOOSE: "Fight!" "Fly away!"

"Do you really think you can beat me?"

"You won't escape, coward."

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"She's alive, but she needs time to recover."

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"Fluttershy, forgive me for clone you,
but I can't waste more time."

"Clone #01, get me another Energy Crystal."

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TIP: If you transform yourseft, you can see in the dark.

"I have bad news. Clone #02 has escaped.
Bring her to me dead or alive. "

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"I won't return. For Twilight we are merely puppets.
Please, join me. "

CHOOSE: "Kill her!" or "Join her!"

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ENDING A

"Clone # 01 has betrayed me.
I guess friendship can't be cloned."

"Surprise! Guess who's going to die!"

"Unfortunately for you, I already have recovered!
So you are who is going to die!"

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TIP: Destroy the final boss! Unlimited bonusses thanks to Twilight!

After the death of the monsters' boss
Fluttershy killed the rest of monsters easily.
Over time, Clone #01 and Clone #02 forgave Twilight,
and they are great friends now.
Currently, all monsters have been exterminated
and the inhabitants of this land enjoy unlimited energy
thanks to the Energy Crystals collected by our heroines.
Your deeds won't be forgotten. Good job!

Characters that have survived:
Fluttershy Twilight
Clone #01 Clone #02

You got the...
Best Ending Good Ending
Bad Ending Worst Ending

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ENDING B

"Clone # 01 has betrayed me.
I guess friendship can't be cloned."

"Surprise! Guess who's going to die!"

Monsters conquered this land, killing most of its inhabitants.
Over time, Clone #01 and Clone #02 decided to face them,
but it was too late.
Currently, Clone #01 and Clone # 02 have fled to another land,
with the hope that monsters don't get there.
The future is uncertain, but hope is the last to die.

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ENDING C

"Great! You're such a good friend as it was Fluttershy."

"A true friend doesn't have forced me to kill my sister."

"Surprise! I have come to kill you both,
but I see that half the work is already done."

Monsters conquered this land,
killing all its inhabitants.
Maybe if our heroines had survived,
things would have been very different.

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ENDING D

"Here the only one who are going to die are you!"

After the death of the monsters' boss
Fluttershy could keep killing monsters.
However, Fluttershy could't forgive Clone #01 for murdering Twilight.
Since that day, they didn't meet again.
Currently, the number of monsters has been reduced and no longer pose a threat,
and the inhabitants of this land enjoy unlimited energy
thanks to the Energy Crystals collected.
Your deeds won't be forgotten. Good job!


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