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SolXeroEraser

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Rot 2014-08-20 02:07:02 Reply

Drown in the seas of chaos,
Wail and wallow at the whip of despair,
As its lacerations back you further into your
Hopeless, helpless, hellhole .
Cry crucifixion at Justice,
Your lies will be raped by truth,
To be left empty and black,
Purged by the flames of hell.

Mankind can rot, for I care not.

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Response to Rot 2014-08-20 02:08:58 Reply

Please keep this stuff in the hipster forum.

I am hilarious and you will quote everything I say.
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Response to Rot 2014-08-20 02:11:57 Reply

At 8/20/14 02:08 AM, koopahermit wrote: Please keep this stuff in the hipster forum.

Its not a poem,
Its a paragraph on the topic.
Also, hush, human.

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Response to Rot 2014-08-20 02:21:06 Reply

At 8/20/14 02:11 AM, SolXeroEraser wrote:
At 8/20/14 02:08 AM, koopahermit wrote: Please keep this stuff in the hipster forum.
Its not a poem,
Its a paragraph on the topic.
Also, hush, human.

That is not a paragraph. Paragraphs are indented at the beginning and are composed of complete sentences. Paragraphs span across the whole available horizontal space. One does not start a sentence on a new line willy-nilly when composing a paragraph. Your body of English words is full of fragments and dependent clauses. There are comma splices everywhere. You could have just took creative license and called your work a free verse poem. That way, you would've saved your informal writing a lot of embarrassment.

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Response to Rot 2014-08-20 02:37:54 Reply

Damn, Sol. I didn't know you were into emo poetry.

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Response to Rot 2014-08-20 06:20:41 Reply

At 8/20/14 02:37 AM, CiviLies wrote: Damn, Sol. I didn't know you were into emo poetry.

I'll make an edgy post so OP can cut himself with it.

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Response to Rot 2014-08-20 07:58:24 Reply

Alright, then.
So, um how about that, huh?
People rotting when they die and stuff.
Interesting shit.

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Response to Rot 2014-08-20 08:38:43 Reply

At 8/20/14 06:20 AM, Amaranthus wrote:
At 8/20/14 02:37 AM, CiviLies wrote: Damn, Sol. I didn't know you were into emo poetry.
I'll make an edgy post so OP can cut himself with it.

Lol, this.

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