so i figured it might be fun to do some more chain writing. i'll start off a poem or whatever and you can contribute to it if you like. write as many lines as you'd like and continue it in anyway you see fit.
The screams grow louder outside my door
afraid to leave, i lock myself away
until i can hear them no more
in my room i will stay....
At 7/13/14 08:50 PM, omedicius wrote: so i figured it might be fun to do some more chain writing. i'll start off a poem or whatever and you can contribute to it if you like. write as many lines as you'd like and continue it in anyway you see fit.
The screams grow louder outside my door
afraid to leave, i lock myself away
until i can hear them no more
in my room i will stay....
Awesome, count me in!
Shadows drown the world outside,
as flesh is ripped from bone;
The voice whispers to me, "abide,
for your sins, you will atone".
Chills and shivers envelope me,
as the voice melts into my mind;
it may speak truth, naught else I can see,
when the darkness renders me blind.....
At 7/14/14 06:02 AM, madboysas wrote:At 7/13/14 08:50 PM, omedicius wrote: so i figured it might be fun to do some more chain writing. i'll start off a poem or whatever and you can contribute to it if you like. write as many lines as you'd like and continue it in anyway you see fit.Awesome, count me in!
The screams grow louder outside my door
afraid to leave, i lock myself away
until i can hear them no more
in my room i will stay....
Shadows drown the world outside,
as flesh is ripped from bone;
The voice whispers to me, "abide,
for your sins, you will atone".
Chills and shivers envelope me,
as the voice melts into my mind;
it may speak truth, naught else I can see,
when the darkness renders me blind.....
you're really good at this
eyes shut and mouth sewn
i only know now i was never alone
"too little too late" i try to say
only to realize my grave mistake
i can no longer cry
and i can no longer scream
cursed now and forever more
to the art of listening
