Hi all!
Newbie here. Been browsing on NG for a whole now. Finally decided to become a member :P
I'm currently working on a game called "Petite", which is a narrative driven game. Link: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/641650
This is the first time I've written anything for a game, let alone a story-dependent game. I'd like to hear some critique on it. The game's still in beta, so there's still time to improve on it if possible.
Thanks for your time ^_^
First things first- wow! I never saw a story told in such a way, and I found it to be really creative. You could play through multiple times and get a different experience each time. In fact, I found the story-telling itself to be more interesting than the story. The mechanic to tell the same story in two different ways is definitely something I was intrigued by, and I applaud your team for coming up with such a unique idea.
Thanks a lot! Appreciate the feedback :)
As you can see, we're trying to experiment with methods of storytelling with Petite. And we've tried to create a calm and soothing atmosphere within the game, so the players can sorta relax and go through the game at a leisurely pace.
This is also my first time writing for a "published" project so to speak ^^;
I'm trying to get as much feedback from the community as I can right now. Hopefully, we'll be able to launch a completed product soon enough.
Do rate the game and drop a comment if you can. And share the game around a little maybe? :P
