I don't know if I should ask for critiques alot, but if not please tell me. Anyway I wanted to ask you guys what you think of this one, I know it doesn't have any color, but other than that is it a good drawing. If it isn't tell me what I should do or fix.
If you want newer critiques then just use this thread. On the drawing though it's very good from your other work, one thing I recommend is for you to keep working on lines because these lines look like you were hesitating. Remember a drawing is just a collection of lines so it's important to have good line work before you start working on shading and stuff.
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At 6/25/14 07:10 AM, crewsjp8 wrote: I don't know if I should ask for critiques alot, but if not please tell me. Anyway I wanted to ask you guys what you think of this one, I know it doesn't have any color, but other than that is it a good drawing. If it isn't tell me what I should do or fix.
Have not seen other of your stuff to compare, but the location of the eye is pretty darn well close to one of the golden cuts. That makes for an interesting composition. Like others suggest, adding some shading or even colour would be the cherry on the icing.
If you go on and shade or colour it, decide a focus and shade dark and darker outwards from the focus for a "cheap trick" to add for an interesting piece :)
I've taken the liberty to do a quick overlay on your drawing to show what i mean.
Thanks for your help guys, and yeah I can see what your talking about now, I will be sure to practice a little more now, I'll probably come up with something good pretty soon.
At 6/26/14 05:17 AM, crewsjp8 wrote: Thanks for your help guys, and yeah I can see what your talking about now, I will be sure to practice a little more now, I'll probably come up with something good pretty soon.
Let us see the update!
