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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-13 02:39:04 Reply

What is your goal with these? Is this a hobby or are you trying to something else with it? There really isn't money to be made in this genre unless you have EXCEPTIONAL artistic skills, and even then, there little chance. This is a very niche market, mostly made up of people who draw/post for free anyway.

Is it just to be "shocking" and get attention, or do you really aspire to be an artist?

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-13 02:40:44 Reply

It seems you are too concerned at attempting finished pieces rather than slowing down and doing proper studies.
You need to take the time to analyze the things that influence you the most and figure out why you find them so visually interesting.

If one of your goals is to create pornography, then I suggest for you to try practicing more dynamic angles rather than carelessly spending time recycling the same things as you learn nothing new.

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-13 11:05:22 Reply

At 7/13/14 02:40 AM, Cairos wrote: It seems you are too concerned at attempting finished pieces rather than slowing down and doing proper studies.
You need to take the time to analyze the things that influence you the most and figure out why you find them so visually interesting.

Its the way I was told to do art though.... I told that a finished picture is better then nothing. I have not done any study yet on anatomy or angels of photos. Its my next step and it will take a wile for me to learn everything but, I am working on it, I just have not put any new stuff up.


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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-13 11:06:52 Reply

I do aspire to become great at the craft I just have to work harder.


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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-13 11:13:20 Reply

This is new this is my skill right now. I am trying to get depth in this photo but, I fail miserably at the chair and there lags.

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-13 12:35:15 Reply

At 7/13/14 11:05 AM, Porn4Grim wrote: Its the way I was told to do art though.... I told that a finished picture is better then nothing

But a 10 sketches in the same time are even better than one finished picture. :3

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-13 20:22:35 Reply

At 7/13/14 12:35 PM, Sjiht wrote:
At 7/13/14 11:05 AM, Porn4Grim wrote: Its the way I was told to do art though.... I told that a finished picture is better then nothing
But a 10 sketches in the same time are even better than one finished picture. :3

Not if your goal is to make finished pictures.

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-13 20:56:14 Reply

At 7/13/14 08:22 PM, Daverom wrote: Not if your goal is to make finished pictures.

I'm pretty sure his goal is to get better at basics. So myup.

:I have not done any study yet on anatomy or angels of photos. Its my next step and it will take a wile for me to learn everything but, I am working on it, I just have not put any new stuff up.

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-13 22:22:55 Reply

What's an "angel of photography"? I have never heard of it. What I have heard of though, are angles of photography.

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 01:57:06 Reply

At 6/24/14 07:12 PM, Porn4Grim wrote:
At 6/24/14 04:32 AM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote:
At 6/23/14 09:32 PM, Porn4Grim wrote: I was told by my friend to come here when I was kicked off DA for the third time.
You see I draw hentai and one of the staff got pretty angry with me because I was actually getting some where with some of my art. I have been posting for 6 years and it is only recently that I started getting reported on DA.
While I'm not keen on DeviantArt, there has to be more to this story than you're letting on.
Nobody gets kicked off of website three times in a row for "improving your artwork", and DA is full of nude drawings, both good and crude.

Enjoy some of my art :D
Looks like her torso is twisted 90 degrees to her hips.
Did you know that Naruto Uzumaki is only 17 years old in the manga so I got kicked off because I was drawing him nude and fucking other characters.... technically it was kid porn to DA... I had no idea it was so specific about things like that so here I am. not only that though I had more of my pictures reported for no reason. I also had looked up some of the art on DA it has a Group called rule 34 its kind of bull...

it is kind of annoying but, must follow the rules.

Thank you for welcoming me :D

Welcome ! DA has strong rules regarding sexually explicit drawings, man. They mention whats NOT allowed. Sexual intercourse is NOT allowed. Generally nude stuff is, meaning "Artistic" nude but not nudity that is sexual.. they even mention that in the drawing they "hands " cant be near the pubic reigon (suggesting masturbation ) somethings like that.

Besides, you can try hentaifoundry maybe ?

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 10:35:37 Reply

At 7/13/14 12:35 PM, Sjiht wrote:
At 7/13/14 11:05 AM, Porn4Grim wrote: Its the way I was told to do art though.... I told that a finished picture is better then nothing
But a 10 sketches in the same time are even better than one finished picture. :3

I would argue that none of your work really seems finished. You don't know art fundamentals. You need to study anatomy, like STAT. Whoever told you it's more important to have a "finished piece" rather than sketching/learning did you a huge dis service. And i would still love you to respond to my earlier post.

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 14:31:14 Reply

I would argue that none of your work really seems finished. You don't know art fundamentals. You need to study anatomy, like STAT. Whoever told you it's more important to have a "finished piece" rather than sketching/learning did you a huge dis service. And i would still love you to respond to my earlier post.

I am working on becoming a hentai comic artist and I do actually want this to be a career or get in with an animation company. I realize that I dont have the basics and like I said before I am working on my study's of anatomy and angles. =_= I am an amateur.

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 14:34:30 Reply

At 7/14/14 01:57 AM, asadfarook wrote: Welcome ! DA has strong rules regarding sexually explicit drawings, man. They mention whats NOT allowed. Sexual intercourse is NOT allowed. Generally nude stuff is, meaning "Artistic" nude but not nudity that is sexual.. they even mention that in the drawing they "hands " cant be near the pubic reigon (suggesting masturbation ) somethings like that.

Besides, you can try hentaifoundry maybe ?

I'm to amateur to post I have to many mistakes yet but, once I have all that fixed I will be able to.


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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 14:35:38 Reply

At 7/13/14 10:22 PM, theclassybutler wrote: What's an "angel of photography"? I have never heard of it. What I have heard of though, are angles of photography.

thx for the correction bro xD


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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 15:02:46 Reply

At 7/14/14 02:31 PM, Porn4Grim wrote: I realize that I dont have the basics and like I said before I am working on my study's of anatomy and angles.

It could be helpful documenting progression and for us to give feedback if you posted these studies.
I'd still like to see you try out the exercise I outlined in this post!


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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 17:46:55 Reply

If you wanted it

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 17:48:56 Reply

.

I'd still like to see you try out the exercise I outlined in this post!

O.O

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 17:51:28 Reply

again

It could be helpful documenting progression and for us to give feedback if you posted these studies.
I'd still like to see you try out the exercise I outlined in this post!

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 17:53:36 Reply

O3O

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 18:03:55 Reply

At 7/14/14 05:53 PM, Porn4Grim wrote: O3O

good work!

Try to sketch down the full body in the 30 sec drawings too, it won't be perfect, so don't worry about the lines not hitting the marks completely. Try to loosen up and use longer, swooshier lines.
Keep it up!


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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 18:17:58 Reply

That is fucking hard to draw a full body in 30s xD I am like looks at screen looks back at drawing looks back at screen.... new pic....

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-14 19:09:12 Reply

I suggest you stay at 2 min, there really isn't any reason to go lower. The most important thing that you are not doing is finishing the crocks. You need to draw the bodies entirely, that is the whole point - getting the proportions down. Also each of them should be done on a separate sheet of paper and you should do at least 15 in one go. Keep it up!

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-16 18:55:30 Reply

kissy kissy

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-22 16:37:07 Reply

Hey guys I have not been on recently. sorry QAQ

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-22 16:39:35 Reply

please enjoy hehe... I didn't mean to stop posting i got a job so busy xD

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-22 16:42:22 Reply

I dont think i posted this ....

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-22 16:43:56 Reply

this was a request :D

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-23 00:34:42 Reply

Try to lay off the porn for a while, kay? I mean, I get it and it's fun to draw, but have you ever thought of maybe impressing us in other genres? I know I'm not particularly one to talk, but even so, you should really try and open up your range.

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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-23 18:03:25 Reply

At 7/23/14 12:34 AM, theclassybutler wrote: Try to lay off the porn for a while, kay? I mean, I get it and it's fun to draw, but have you ever thought of maybe impressing us in other genres? I know I'm not particularly one to talk, but even so, you should really try and open up your range.

Good Sir,

I don't just draw porn I draw other things to. If you had time to look at my profile you would know that.


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Response to Got Kicked Off Deviant art. 2014-07-23 19:54:59 Reply

Not much feedback as of recent? Oh well.

I've gone thround some of your pictures and found some mistakes that should be adressed.

Starting with your Study from the 18th, the woman had a broken right shoulder, aswell as a very concaved left elbow. When someone is sleeping, the person is very relaxed, so the pose should reflext that. About the right arm: Given the "kinda-sort-of" perspective of the sketch, it would be hidden behind the torso and the head.
If it was in a more overhead perspective, you would have to create a clearer connection between the back and the shoulder.
Also, keep in mind that humans are made out of flesh, not from plastic. Muscles move not only if we relax or stress them, but also when they come in contact with other objects. Keeping that in mind, the thigh would flatten slightly over the tibia.

The Pic withthe tied woman and the poacher Naruto looking fella (?!) suffers from many anatomical errors. Legs and arms being too short, the head of the poacher being too thin, his ear being completely flat, aswell as the womans odd shoulder muscles and baloon breasts.
It shows that you have little understanding of basic human proportions and anatomy, which, for a pornographer, is anything but good. I did the redline to illustrate how one could fix said problems. I included a share of sketches on the right side of it to give you a quick guide on how to draw breasts. You see, breasts are subjected to gravity, too. Thus, they are pulled down.

The final one, THIS ONE, has different problems. Although some things got better, the way the woman poses here would break her spine. Also, the man looks like he is about to fall over given the angle. The also seems to be little regard for other muscle groups like the serratus anterior, the external oblique or even the biceps.
The Pose of him in general is not alot better. Granted, we can see very little of it (most of it is hidden behind the table), but it still looks very stiff (Falloing over stiff as a board). The position of his left arm gives the idea he is grasping between her legs, btw. I know its erotica, but it seems rather nonsensical given the scenario here.
Below I sketched how the position of the individual body parts could be, aswell as a sideview of the woman resting on the table in her fixed pose.

You need to work on your proportional and anatomical understanding and get an idea of how to picture a three-dimentional object in a two-dimentional medium. Things like correct optic shortening, being able to draw different body parts in different perspectives etc.
You should also practice how the human body moves and expresses itself as a whole. Make gesture sketches, focusing not on a detailed depiction of a human, but more on an expressive, yet marginally proportionate correct one.
Good websites to do these things are QuickPoses and Pixelovety, but you can also go outside and draw real people in public. In fact, this is one of the best things you can do, since the people are not going to slow down and pose for you. You better be quick with your pencil.

If you intend to draw more erotica (and I believe you do), I recomment trying to resort to less porn stereotypes. There are some things, some poses, some scenarios that have been done ad infinitum that just do not stand out anymore. I'm not suggesting that you should go full crazy on your works, but you may want to create some themes and characters in your work that make is stand out. Perhaps affectionate intercourse? More playfull one? Maybe BDSM? Some unique angles? Having own characters with own their own personality and preferences have it together (you can tell alot about a character just by the way they look, move or speak. No need for long introductions or Bios )? Something that makes your work stand out from the crowd.


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