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FaisalOrb
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Animation WIP 2014-05-25 23:55:14 Reply

Here's the sketch: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/579f84956da8c9b70ca54a1d47679eb2

Here's how it's turning out: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/53bd9705daddf6f5b07b378b6b9cdf75

I thought I could get an opinion or tips on it or something
Can anyone make out what's happening?

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Response to Animation WIP 2014-05-26 06:10:38 Reply

I think you need to work on anticipation. Such as, the hand moves far too slowly and would warrant a reaction from the man (Unless you intended him not to react). It appeared as though he was completely zoned out when he was grabbed.

Good animation though!

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Response to Animation WIP 2014-05-26 17:00:35 Reply
At 5/26/14 06:10 AM, VaneFox wrote: I think you need to work on anticipation. Such as, the hand moves far too slowly and would warrant a reaction from the man (Unless you intended him not to react). It appeared as though he was completely zoned out when he was grabbed.

Good animation though!

Thank you
He's meant to look like that but yeah you're right I see the hand being slow I do need to work on that htank you

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