What's her real name then? Wilorbsa? You should try to make more traditional logos that's easy to distinguish. Something more simple without all that unnecessary flashy shading. Logos as an ideal circumstance, should always be minimalist lest it would be too complex to make an impression. Simplicity is key.
About your shading exercise, it would be great of you somehow used something darker, like a darker pencil or something. I can't really see it properly. Use a pen or a charcoal pencil just to make it a bit more starker in contrast. It looks too faded. On the bright side though, it's always good to see you practicing at least I know you're making an effort to improve yourself. Good luck on your endeavors though Horyugouki/SINComixx/Dragonpunch/Kiwipunch/theclassybutler! Fifth time's a charm.
Look at all those accounts jesus