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Kixen
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I like your V-Neck. 2014-04-12 18:31:44 Reply

I'm not sure why I made this. Should I add to it somehow? Any critiques on this tiny clip are welcome.

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/ce2482c6a9aac496eb48bfe7356d3c38

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Response to I like your V-Neck. 2014-04-12 23:29:39 Reply

Yo dude I like your short animation.

Yeah, overall it works. It's simple, it's to the point, it's a bit random, and it works. I'm not sure you need to do anything to it at this point. If you wanted to get a bit more interest in there, you could possibly take out the twinning going on (example: http://www.animatorisland.com/twinning-102-change-it-up/ ) because there's not a lot to really change minus that.

Fun little clip.

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Response to I like your V-Neck. 2014-04-13 07:50:59 Reply

It's simple, short and random. It's not half bad for a really short clip. I like how smooth the animation seems like.

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Response to I like your V-Neck. 2014-04-13 09:54:26 Reply
At 4/12/14 11:29 PM, JKR wrote: Yo dude I like your short animation.

Yeah, overall it works. It's simple, it's to the point, it's a bit random, and it works. I'm not sure you need to do anything to it at this point. If you wanted to get a bit more interest in there, you could possibly take out the twinning going on (example: http://www.animatorisland.com/twinning-102-change-it-up/ ) because there's not a lot to really change minus that.

Fun little clip.

Love the article, and I guess thats something I do quite often, I guess its just a part of my style when it comes to people, definitely something I could work on though, thanks!

And thanks for calling it smooth man!

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Response to I like your V-Neck. 2014-04-13 13:37:38 Reply
At 4/13/14 09:54 AM, Kixen wrote:
Love the article, and I guess thats something I do quite often, I guess its just a part of my style when it comes to people, definitely something I could work on though, thanks!

And thanks for calling it smooth man!

Yeah, it's something that sneaks into every animator's work. Somehow it just comes naturally! Plus it's easier because you don't have to time each part separately. And in some motions, twinning is needed. But the majority of the time the action will be more interesting (and we're entertainers, after all!) if you offset something, even slightly.

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