At 4/15/14 12:47 AM, applepie12 wrote:
It's a cute drawing, but the shoulder need be tweaked just a bit.
Mind you, I am far from a pro so you need not take my word for it, but from what I see the spacing may be the problem.
Hope you don't mind redline:
Not at all. I see what you mean. I think some of the changes you made do look anatomically more correct. I will probably make those corrections near the final concept composite. I'm still learning this stuff too, so any pointers are always appreciated. Thank god for sketch phase! :D
One other thing I was thinking about was the left leg (coming towards you). I'm not sure if that looks right, or if I should kick it under her in a mid walking cycle. Something about that leg feels "off" with the weight and balance distribution, but I'm also starring at this drawing too much. :P