Here's critiques for the 'Monstrous Beast Within Vibrate':
The effects and the angle on the beast make it kind of hard to figure out what's happening. Using a consistent light source and working on your composition are ways to avoid that. I'd also avoid using Photoshop effects to make things 'look cooler'. Instead try painting the effects yourself.
Thanks for the critique, the dissonance was intentional, I like the fact that it disturbs me, therefore may disturb others beyond the content.
It is pretty close to the drawing the drawing itself is cleaner, and it is simply a portrait of said monster so no arms or capes.
Just viscous maw, and death.
Secondary question though the linking is not preferred even when it is to newgrounds?