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Hello this is my first post on NG Jan. 21st, 2014 @ 02:52 AM Reply

  • Monstrous Beast Within Vibrate
    Monstrous Beast Within Vibrate by unixarcade

    Image originally here http://www.pinterest.com/pin/32932640997713649/

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Just wanted to share thanks.
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Response to Hello this is my first post on NG Jan. 21st, 2014 @ 03:09 AM Reply

At 1/21/14 02:52 AM, unixarcade wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/unixarcade/monstrous-beast-within-vibrate
Just wanted to share thanks.
See you soon.

Hello, I'm new here too and this is my third post ever on the forums.


I accept all critique.

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Response to Hello this is my first post on NG Jan. 21st, 2014 @ 03:18 AM Reply

At 1/21/14 03:09 AM, SuperArtNinja wrote:
At 1/21/14 02:52 AM, unixarcade wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/unixarcade/monstrous-beast-within-vibrate
Just wanted to share thanks.
See you soon.
Hello, I'm new here too and this is my third post ever on the forums.

Thanks for the hello.

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Response to Hello this is my first post on NG Jan. 21st, 2014 @ 05:44 AM Reply

At 1/21/14 03:18 AM, unixarcade wrote:
At 1/21/14 03:09 AM, SuperArtNinja wrote:
At 1/21/14 02:52 AM, unixarcade wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/unixarcade/monstrous-beast-within-vibrate
Just wanted to share thanks.
See you soon.
Hello, I'm new here too and this is my third post ever on the forums.
Thanks for the hello.

It seems fairly quiet around here, but that's probably because we're new here.


I accept all critique.

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Response to Hello this is my first post on NG Jan. 21st, 2014 @ 10:28 AM Reply

@unixarcade , @SuperArtNinja and @trifle-confusion :
Welcome to the Art forum.
Here you can post your art in a personal art tread. Posting a link is usually only used for pieces that are to big to upload.
Including the image in your post is favored. (We also usually like to keep everything by the same artist in one tread which is nice because that makes it easy to see progress and also makes it more likely for people to give critiques.)
There's a bunch of themed treads that you can participate in. Here's a bunch of them that you can bump with new art.
You could also make your own activity tread if you can think of a fun theme.
If you want to talk about art related or stuff or just stuff that might interest people on this forum you can post it in the art forum lounge.
Art Weeklies is the latest one that keeps coming back, by posting there you can prove your worth (⌐■_■)

Here's critiques for the 'Monstrous Beast Within Vibrate':
The effects and the angle on the beast make it kind of hard to figure out what's happening. Using a consistent light source and working on your composition are ways to avoid that. I'd also avoid using Photoshop effects to make things 'look cooler'. Instead try painting the effects yourself.

Hello this is my first post on NG

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Response to Hello this is my first post on NG Jan. 21st, 2014 @ 11:05 AM Reply

Here's critiques for the 'Monstrous Beast Within Vibrate':
The effects and the angle on the beast make it kind of hard to figure out what's happening. Using a consistent light source and working on your composition are ways to avoid that. I'd also avoid using Photoshop effects to make things 'look cooler'. Instead try painting the effects yourself.

Thanks for the critique, the dissonance was intentional, I like the fact that it disturbs me, therefore may disturb others beyond the content.

It is pretty close to the drawing the drawing itself is cleaner, and it is simply a portrait of said monster so no arms or capes.
Just viscous maw, and death.

Secondary question though the linking is not preferred even when it is to newgrounds?

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Response to Hello this is my first post on NG Jan. 21st, 2014 @ 11:36 AM Reply

At 1/21/14 11:05 AM, unixarcade wrote: Secondary question though the linking is not preferred even when it is to newgrounds?

Linking to your piece in the art portal is fine.
There's no actual rules against linking to other sites (except maybe offence, illegal stuff and spam) but people are just more likely to respond if they don't have to click to any links. We're a lazy bunch.

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Response to Hello this is my first post on NG Jan. 21st, 2014 @ 01:04 PM Reply

hi! thanks for the welcome ^^
I'll go check out those threads :)


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Response to Hello this is my first post on NG Jan. 24th, 2014 @ 09:13 PM Reply

At 1/21/14 11:36 AM, Nacco wrote:
At 1/21/14 11:05 AM, unixarcade wrote: Secondary question though the linking is not preferred even when it is to newgrounds?
Linking to your piece in the art portal is fine.
There's no actual rules against linking to other sites (except maybe offence, illegal stuff and spam) but people are just more likely to respond if they don't have to click to any links. We're a lazy bunch.

Unless it comes to art right then you might have work that captivates you and you will work on it until you are satisfied.