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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 19th, 2014 @ 09:31 AM Reply

I am jealous of this comic.


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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 19th, 2014 @ 10:13 AM Reply

At 1/18/14 10:11 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote:
Well, I don't feel like getting critiques, so I might post this somewhere else.

Took you long enough to come to this conclusion.
You really are full of yourself. You think you got what it takes to actually be taken seriously. But you don't. You're very far off.
Not only is your whole comic thing sub-par, you're posting this on a forum which is aimed at criticism and helping others advance their skills, expecting people with 5 times your experience to just gobble up the sludge you produce.
You're gonna dig yourself in a hole, with the attitude your going with right now. A hole of mediocrity. And you'll never be able to crawl out and reach your dreams if you won't change it.
This counts for pretty much every aspect of life, not just art.


Try not being a bitch for once, huh?

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 19th, 2014 @ 03:30 PM Reply

At 1/19/14 05:39 AM, Flowers10 wrote:
So yeah, keep your drawings to yourself if you don't want anyone saying bad things about it.
Or just take it like a man(no homo).

Fuck you.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 19th, 2014 @ 03:39 PM Reply

At 1/19/14 03:30 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote: Fuck you.

Okey but i want top you can be bottom.
Your art is bad btw.


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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 19th, 2014 @ 03:40 PM Reply

At 1/19/14 03:30 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote:
Fuck you.

Things like this is just you digging your own grave, kid.
Can't think of what to say? Just lamely insult us. You're not even trying to come up with something clever or funny.
I kinda want this thread to stay now, this is actually getting good. Can't wait to see how you'll make yourself look like a fool next.


Try not being a bitch for once, huh?

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 19th, 2014 @ 03:47 PM Reply

At 1/19/14 10:13 AM, Breaktroll wrote:
Not only is your whole comic thing sub-par, you're posting this on a forum which is aimed at criticism and helping others advance their skills, expecting people with 5 times your experience to just gobble up the sludge you produce.
You're gonna dig yourself in a hole, with the attitude your going with right now. A hole of mediocrity. And you'll never be able to crawl out and reach your dreams if you won't change it.
This counts for pretty much every aspect of life, not just art.

Does it look I care, no! If you don't like this comic, don't read it! I'm sure you have. Because let's face it, I just drew this comic for fun, I just like to share thing with others, that's all. And some of the comic is unscripted, so i'm sorry if the writing is not so good. But all in all, I just do this for fun, nothing else. So yeah, I hope you understood.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 19th, 2014 @ 03:49 PM Reply

At 1/19/14 03:39 PM, Flowers10 wrote:
At 1/19/14 03:30 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote: Fuck you.
Okey but i want top you can be bottom.
Your art is bad btw.

Says the dude who thinks he's so pro.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 19th, 2014 @ 03:51 PM Reply

At 1/19/14 03:40 PM, Breaktroll wrote:
At 1/19/14 03:30 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote:
Fuck you.
Can't think of what to say? Just lamely insult us. You're not even trying to come up with something clever or funny.
I kinda want this thread to stay now, this is actually getting good. Can't wait to see how you'll make yourself look like a fool next.

That's what she said.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 19th, 2014 @ 03:59 PM Reply

At 1/19/14 03:49 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote: Says the dude who thinks he's so pro.

Yeah, thats what i'm saying.
Also technicly i am a pro. "Professional" means making money with a certain skill.
Which i am. I would'nt call myself pro tho, not if it wasnt to prove a point to someone who likes to insult people who give valid critique.


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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 19th, 2014 @ 04:13 PM Reply

At 1/19/14 03:59 PM, Flowers10 wrote:
Yeah, thats what i'm saying.
Also technicly i am a pro. "Professional" means making money with a certain skill.
Which i am. I would'nt call myself pro tho, not if it wasnt to prove a point to someone who likes to insult people who give valid critique.

Whatever.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 19th, 2014 @ 04:16 PM Reply

At 1/19/14 04:13 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote:
At 1/19/14 03:59 PM, Flowers10 wrote:
Yeah, thats what i'm saying.
Also technicly i am a pro. "Professional" means making money with a certain skill.
Which i am. I would'nt call myself pro tho, not if it wasnt to prove a point to someone who likes to insult people who give valid critique.
Whatever.

Good luck with your comic,mate.Especially with that attitude.You will need a SHITLOAD of luck .


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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 19th, 2014 @ 04:49 PM Reply

At 1/19/14 04:16 PM, ThePsychoSheep wrote:
Good luck with your comic,mate.Especially with that attitude.You will need a SHITLOAD of luck .

Thanks, i'll remember that.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 23rd, 2014 @ 07:47 PM Reply

Anyhow, page will be coming hopefully very soon, so don't get too excited.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 23rd, 2014 @ 08:08 PM Reply

At 1/23/14 07:47 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote: Anyhow, page will be coming hopefully very soon, so don't get too excited.

My anus is almost going to explode from excitement.


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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 23rd, 2014 @ 09:34 PM Reply

At 1/23/14 08:08 PM, ThePsychoSheep wrote:
At 1/23/14 07:47 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote: Anyhow, page will be coming hopefully very soon, so don't get too excited.
My anus is almost going to explode from excitement.

Lol.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 25th, 2014 @ 06:58 PM Reply

Again, pardon me for the long wait, anyhow, here's page 8 of the comic. Seems one the thugs had enough with omega dog and decides to take care of him. And of course, you'll see soon happens next.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 25th, 2014 @ 07:11 PM Reply

At 1/25/14 06:58 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote: Again, pardon me for the long wait, anyhow, here's page 8 of the comic. Seems one the thugs had enough with omega dog and decides to take care of him. And of course, you'll see soon happens next.

You'd want to flip the two chat bubbles on the top right, as in put the bottom one on top and the top one on the bottom.
This is because when you read a panel, you read from top to bottom, and yet the top is obviously a response to the bottom.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 25th, 2014 @ 08:11 PM Reply

At 1/25/14 07:11 PM, bigjonny13 wrote:
You'd want to flip the two chat bubbles on the top right, as in put the bottom one on top and the top one on the bottom.
This is because when you read a panel, you read from top to bottom, and yet the top is obviously a response to the bottom.

I know, there just wasn't enough space to fit the bubble, so I had to do it like that.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 26th, 2014 @ 04:31 PM Reply

At 1/25/14 08:11 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote: I know, there just wasn't enough space to fit the bubble, so I had to do it like that.

Nah buddy, come on. You can do better than that.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 26th, 2014 @ 04:36 PM Reply

If comics are as close to animation as I suspect they are, I suggest observing film staging techniques. What's cool about drawing is that you're in absolute control of everything like angles, backgrounds, and characters. You can always shimmy things about until you're satisfied.. or when it's time to move on.

Are the drawings coming first and then the dialogue bubbles? Together? Spontaneous dialogue?

At 1/25/14 08:11 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote:
At 1/25/14 07:11 PM, bigjonny13 wrote:
You'd want to flip the two chat bubbles on the top right, as in put the bottom one on top and the top one on the bottom.
This is because when you read a panel, you read from top to bottom, and yet the top is obviously a response to the bottom.
I know, there just wasn't enough space to fit the bubble, so I had to do it like that.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 26th, 2014 @ 05:14 PM Reply

my favorite part of this thread is when people keep trying to help even though he is clearly not interested in feedback.


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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 26th, 2014 @ 09:16 PM Reply

At 1/26/14 05:14 PM, Template88 wrote: my favorite part of this thread is when people keep trying to help even though he is clearly not interested in feedback.

I don't think so. So, ANY other comments?

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 29th, 2014 @ 09:20 PM Reply

Page nine coming very soon.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 29th, 2014 @ 09:48 PM Reply

At 1/29/14 09:20 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote: Page nine coming very soon.

FUCK. YES.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 30th, 2014 @ 01:30 AM Reply

At 1/29/14 09:48 PM, JackDCurleo wrote:
At 1/29/14 09:20 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote: Page nine coming very soon.
FUCK. YES.

Right.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 30th, 2014 @ 09:51 AM Reply

At 1/30/14 01:30 AM, RayLeeWorld wrote:
At 1/29/14 09:48 PM, JackDCurleo wrote:
At 1/29/14 09:20 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote: Page nine coming very soon.
FUCK. YES.
Right.

Come on bro don't be a tease give us page 9 already. Its tearing me apart, I gotta know what happens next.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 30th, 2014 @ 01:07 PM Reply

The series is cool but i would like to see some detailed artwork as Comics glorify the action and the object/ person


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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 30th, 2014 @ 08:28 PM Reply

At 1/30/14 01:07 PM, hreyas wrote: The series is cool but i would like to see some detailed artwork as Comics glorify the action and the object/ person

I'll see what I can do.

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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 30th, 2014 @ 08:29 PM Reply

At 1/30/14 08:28 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote:
At 1/30/14 01:07 PM, hreyas wrote: The series is cool but i would like to see some detailed artwork as Comics glorify the action and the object/ person
I'll see what I can do.

Less talk,more pages


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Response to Omega dog(A short comic) Jan. 31st, 2014 @ 07:15 PM Reply

At 1/30/14 08:29 PM, ThePsychoSheep wrote:
At 1/30/14 08:28 PM, RayLeeWorld wrote:
At 1/30/14 01:07 PM, hreyas wrote: The series is cool but i would like to see some detailed artwork as Comics glorify the action and the object/ person
I'll see what I can do.
Less talk,more pages

We'll see.