At 1/6/14 04:31 PM, JackDCurleo wrote:
I'm not going to bother saying anything about the art since it won't do anything.
I'd have to wholeheartedly agree-
I mean, In posting to the art forum, you should be looking for constructive criticism, and listening to what people have to say, and either acting upon it or justifying why you wouldn't make those amendments to your work. In the art realm, this is a lot better than your previous thread, but it could use a lot of work. As a story, it seems cut-and-dried and the dialogue seems a little underdeveloped.