Thinking of publishing this book

[BugDoesMinecraft]

The storyline is that this panda named Shai-King is bored with his normal routine. So he asks his mate, Li-Na, what to do about his problem. She says he should go on an adventure. He decides he should. So he sets off, and then he comes to a bamboo grove, but he can't get to it. Then, he goes back and gets his mate, but then when he gets back, There is wall. He doesn't know what happened, and they're both sad. Then, they go to sleep, for it's evening when they get back. Then, in the morning, Shai-King goes out. He then realizes he doesn't need all of that extra bamboo and that he's good the way he is now. This is supposed to be a children's story, and a moral story. But one extra thing that I accidentally added is that you can sort of discuss the story. Like, were they in a wildlife park? Were they abducted by aliens and being observed, unebknowest to them? Why was the grove blocked off? Hope you like the story, and comment and say if you think it's good enough to become a real book.

[Diki]

At 12/7/13 01:56 AM, BugDoesMinecraft wrote: Hope you like the story, and comment and say if you think it's good enough to become a real book.

That's just an idea, not a story. Once you write it out it will be a story, and until then no-one can tell you if it's any good. It all comes down to execution. If you have anything written you should post it (assuming it's not a first draft).

[Scarface]

At 12/7/13 01:56 AM, BugDoesMinecraft wrote: But one extra thing that I accidentally added is that you can sort of discuss the story.

Shouldn't that be the case with any story?

Like, were they in a wildlife park?

That should be apparent by the way the story is told, or how/why the grove was blocked off.

Were they abducted by aliens and being observed, unebknowest to them?

Dude. No.

Hope you like the story, and comment and say if you think it's good enough to become a real book.

Like Diki said, a lot of it comes down to execution, but I'd say with some minor changes this wouldn't be bad.

[Spedmallet]

Editors don't like anthropomorphous animals

it won't work unless you're making a children's book with pictures