I Dream of a Nippled Mountain

[Entice]

I dream of a nippled mountain and scale its face
I reach the summit and realize it's my mother's breath
I fall down that nippled mountain into the milky ether of years past
See my reflection in the mirror, and realize there's nothing left

[Maltos]

At 12/5/13 01:20 AM, Entice wrote: I dream of a nippled mountain and scale its face
I reach the summit and realize it's my mother's breath
I fall down that nippled mountain into the milky ether of years past
See my reflection in the mirror, and realize there's nothing left

Feet fail me not

[Entice]

At 12/6/13 01:55 AM, Maltos wrote: Feet fail me not

Is that feedback?

Constructive criticism plz

[Maltos]

At 12/6/13 01:57 AM, Entice wrote:

At 12/6/13 01:55 AM, Maltos wrote: Feet fail me not

Is that feedback?

Constructive criticism plz

sorry I was just thinking about running up a nippled mountain
(feet fail me not)
wanna get to the top!!
I did enjoy the poem and then the mothers breath thing, very clever indeed

[Entice]

At 12/6/13 02:07 AM, Maltos wrote: sorry I was just thinking about running up a nippled mountain

Oh, I get it now
Thnx for the kind comments

[Annie445]

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[jhypsyshah]

Diggit..

Curious if that was inspired by seeing a dog dreaming as if it's nursing?

Otherwise it kinda reminds me of some giantessness. XD