I wrote a pasta!

[Splats]

And you can read it here.
Tell me what you think, and don't be afraid to be harsh, as long as you're familiar with constructive criticism.
Thanks, NG.

[ManDeep]

You're supposed too cook pasta, doofus.

[Doncom]

I like pasta !
...
...hey, that creepypasta is cool ! Not scary enough to hold me awake all the night long, but it's cool !

[Dopamine]

Weird story

[Splats]

At 11/24/13 01:27 PM, Amaranthus wrote: How charming.

I cannot believe the amount of people not actually reading the pasta and just doing their best to be funny.
C'mon Amaranthus, you Belgian cockhole, give it a shot and tell me what you think. Your writing is okay, and I could use some advice.

[TowelMarket]

Alright... I get that the meat the guests were eating was Katie's meat, but why the brutal raping? I kind of get the impression that Katie's father was behind this, judging by his sentence in the end. And is Ross dead as well? Please answer or my damn curiosity won't let me sleep.

[Splats]

At 11/24/13 01:49 PM, TowelMarket wrote: Alright... I get that the meat the guests were eating was Katie's meat, but why the brutal raping? I kind of get the impression that Katie's father was behind this, judging by his sentence in the end.

I know, I know. I pictured the story differently at first, but it turned out kind of different as I was writing. It's mostly improvised, so if there's some stuff that doesn't make sense (two rapists instead of one?) it's my fault. No open ending implied mostly, although your next question...

And is Ross dead as well?

... remains unanswered.

Please answer or my damn curiosity won't let me sleep.

Mission accomplished. Goodnight TowelMarket ;)

[Viper]

It was okay I suppose.
I mean it wasn't as good as say the Russian Sleep Experiment one.
But it wasn't as crappy as those Sonic or MLP ones....

[Splats]

At 11/24/13 01:56 PM, Viper50 wrote: It was okay I suppose.

Thanks, I guess.

I mean it wasn't as good as say the Russian Sleep Experiment one.

Don't compare my pasta to what's probably the best pasta out there, please.

But it wasn't as crappy as those Sonic or MLP ones....

Thanks, I guess.

[TowelMarket]

Oh thanks for answering those, though I have to add one: What was the father's motive to kill Katie? Was it because he went very mad at her choice of career? Or was it something else?

[dymck1]

That was pretty good.

Wasn't very scary or suspenseful (I don't really get much out of the whole files on a computer deal), but it was interesting enough to keep me reading to the end.

[argile]

That was pretty disturbing I've got to admit.

[kazumazkan]

pasta is noodle like foos with tomato sauce and cheese that was a story