Audio Short Story Feedback Request

[elreybon]

Hey all, I posted a short story in audiobook form in the audio portal and I would love feedback! I'm posting this in both the audio and writing portals so I can get both perspectives. Also, I know this isn't really what is typically posted on NG, but do you all think it has merit or should I take this kind of file elsewhere? If this becomes popular I may make a series of stories and post them here. Thanks!

• 
  Larry: On Being Born by elreybon

  Larry: On Being Born

  Score

  5.00 / 5.00

  Type

  Voice

  Genre

  Spoken Word

  Popularity

  43 Views

• Loading...

So to sum up:
1. Please leave feedback/reviews for the audio so I can better myself.
2. Is this kind of audio file something that should appear on NG? Is it something that you would like to see more of on NG? Or is it something best taken elsewhere (And if so, where)? Discuss...

[elreybon]

To see what if being said on the audio forum...

http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1355065#bbspost24882177_post_text

[elreybon]

Ignore the link above, audio forum topic was deleted for breach of rules... Totally my fault, I'll see if I can start a similar topic without breaching rules...

[Spedmallet]

Your style of narrating in my opinion really sets the mood, but listening carefully I can really hear the accent being forced occasionally. That's just my nitpick though.

I gotta say, you have something going though. I liked it.