First Animation Feedback

[IEntertainment]

Hey guys, so a few days ago i posted my first ever animation and i am really looking for some feedback on it to which i can grow for my next shorts.

It is Previously On The Walking Dead
a walking dead parody found here
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/628755

Thanks so much!

[Fim]

At 11/20/13 02:44 PM, IEntertainment wrote: Hey guys, so a few days ago i posted my first ever animation and i am really looking for some feedback on it to which i can grow for my next shorts.

It is Previously On The Walking Dead
a walking dead parody found here
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/628755

Thanks so much!

Hey Jim,

Your flash is really impressive for a first attempt, you're definetely showing a lot of talent.

It might be worth remembering that we have a Animation Forum that might be more useful to ask for feedback in rather than the General forum. If you posted this topic in there you would probably get some more constructive feedback. :)

[Splats]

Hi Jim,

I actually enjoyed it a bunch! The references you made ("only use it when you really have to") were spot on!
If there's anything I have to give some critique to, it's the animation. Judging by the way you draw, I'd say you have quite some potential, but your characters look like the just might need a teensy bit more effort.

Overall, I'm really impressed by your flash, it being your first one. Keep practicing, and I'm sure you'll get fp in no time.
Kudos to you, man.

[IEntertainment]

At 11/20/13 03:02 PM, Splats wrote: Hi Jim,

I actually enjoyed it a bunch! The references you made ("only use it when you really have to") were spot on!
If there's anything I have to give some critique to, it's the animation. Judging by the way you draw, I'd say you have quite some potential, but your characters look like the just might need a teensy bit more effort.

Overall, I'm really impressed by your flash, it being your first one. Keep practicing, and I'm sure you'll get fp in no time.
Kudos to you, man.

Hey man, sorry its been a few weeks since i have been online thanks for the feedback :) I will keep practicing and should make another soon. Thanks for the pointers!!

[iLiEkPiE123]

Not bad.