My Art

[Grafyte]

Hey! I haven't really introduced myself as an artist here yet so here's some stuff.

There's old and new stuff mixed in here. Click on the numbers above the images to go to different drawings and click on the images themselves to get a full view, please.

http://imgur.com/SXWs8Bm,8XdifXh,3cbea9m,HgocIGD,HqM2eOE,4vkKxHy,gvlz28h,uqNCk6W,eM75h2Z,p3juKqz,b4j0Qqy,vatc2P1,wmvv2CY,exklyZn,AkM80KG,WQgPkXZ,YLECAXP,ytzRwCp,qEbfzL2,giF9vTX,L7Har9C,bb4QZSD,H1veAlG,3l58biA,D94pC6W,1ue8lff,xYVitOz,eWf8FkY,TCPpqAR,D8maGba,tUbGhsK,bQRj31D,1F10Thq

Here's my DeviantArt as well.
http://ormid.deviantart.com/gallery/

If you want commission work, leave a comment, PM me, or email me at [e-mail]

Let me know what you think.

[ThornesAttic]

I'm digging the overall style, but being an art student, I've been bred to nitpick.

Something that's missing in your work is contrast. This style could really pop if you had a full range of value from blackest black to whitest white.

Right now it's all very mid-toned and flat.

But you've certainly got an eye, and you've got your own style going, so keep that up for sure!

Looking forward to seeing more!

[Grafyte]

Hey, thanks a lot man! I've been trying to work on not blending my colors so much with all the greys and everything, it's a big issue of mine. Thanks for pointing it out!

[Tapersteve]

Nice illustration and wonderful concept
few things from me which could be worked on;

I think the skeleton detracts from the focal i agree something needs to be in the bottom right space but I think a rock would have worked better and made the work feel less busy. All in all a good composition though.

light sources, you have made this piece complicated for yourself with many different sources of light and that's fine, but i think you need to think about where your highlights and shadows will be because of these.

[Grafyte]

At 11/20/13 06:56 PM, Tapersteve wrote: Nice illustration and wonderful concept
few things from me which could be worked on;

I think the skeleton detracts from the focal i agree something needs to be in the bottom right space but I think a rock would have worked better and made the work feel less busy. All in all a good composition though.

light sources, you have made this piece complicated for yourself with many different sources of light and that's fine, but i think you need to think about where your highlights and shadows will be because of these.

Thanks for the cnc! I agree, something less eye grabbing would've been way more fitting. I have explored shading immensely, but rarely do I explore shadows. I will work more on this, thank you again!

[Artsupplies]

your idea is fantastic. I really like it . thanks to share with us.
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[Grafyte]

At 11/21/13 02:05 AM, Artsupplies wrote: your idea is fantastic. I really like it . thanks to share with us.
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No problem! Thanks for the encouragement!

[Ciya]

Nice pictures. I like them. I hope you'll post new and other pictures too.

[Alrog]

Hi there,

First off, marvellous work. It's always a pleasure to see someone new gain the courage to post (I understand it can be nerve-wracking). But on the whole this is a promising piece of art.

My few critiques are that your light sources don't quite match the shading. Given you've the main focal point being above the spider (that's fine), you've three other sources; the touches, and they too will give off differing contrasts, take it into consideration perhaps?
Aside from that just work on blending (though it's visually pleasing as is) and don't be afraid to really do for a darker and lighter palette.

Keep it up, it's very promising.