For Reals? Sasquatch - For Review

[elreybon]

Hi please read this script and let me know what you think!

For Reals? Sasquatch Script

[elreybon]

Here's a link to the same script but on google drive

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1T6ZVTaHNABIr1TIn2stjW0hGNsYEw5a1rjVKL4uhu4NpdIFzWwYetlImBwpJ/edit?usp=sharing

[Kylpault]

I shall inspect each joke I recognized as an intended joke. Jokes are in order they appear.

Things we don't know we don't know: Eh. I'd save the comedic intention reveal for the next joke.
Is it...For Reals?: I like this. Frivolous content in a serious tone tends to work well for my comedic tastes.
Intro Confessionals: Sets the tone of the characters, so while Paige's confessional is only moderately funny I allow it.
Video: The fact that it's moss in the video isn't really funny to me, but the shortness of the video is. I asked myself "that's it?" and chuckled.
Paige Confessional: This was really good. Don't change it.
Moss Confessional: The name wasn't funny at first, but the thought of punching the guy was.
Sasquatch Scent and other items: Weirdness humor, I enjoy it.
Paige Confessional: Same joke twice, kinda a buzzkill.
Narrator: Serious tone, frivolous content. Again, it works.
CRAZY EYES: Best joke in the script.
Lee Confessional: Didn't really have a punchline, so it didn't really work for me.
Sasquatch Appearing: Decent, but I feel like variants of this type of joke are used a lot.
Sensor jokes: Starts strong, but used a lot. I understand the necessity though.
Rest of the jokes didn't really stick.

So yeah. Reviewed. Woo!