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elreybon
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A poetic rant... 2013-10-24 08:01:54 Reply

Hey there fellow driver
cell phone in your hand,
at first I thought that you were drunk
but now I understand!
It isn't beer that holds
the culpability.
Now I see it is in fact
your own stupidity!
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The previous poem fell fully formed right into my noggin.
You can guess the circumstances.
I suppose it's better than cursing ;)

What do you all think?

Please take any criticism as helpful advice not an attack. I wouldn't have taken the time to reply if I didn't like your post!

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Response to A poetic rant... 2013-10-24 09:52:10 Reply

A distracted driver is driving nonetheless.
Swerves all over the road. Danger to the rest of us.
Put away that iPhone, Jerk. Let that call go.
Put Twitter away while you navigate though.

[ You aren't fluent ] .:∴…

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