Wip Pokemon Parody Adventure Show

[oldmanbeefjerky]

Hi, this is my pokemon parody adventure show, its more a pilot episode if anything, the plot is considerably bland compared to whats in store, also the drawing isnt totally great ill admit.

Anyway, ide like some critique, im soon going to complete the animation and add in a mad random alternate ending, before i do, i want to get all what ive done so far, up to a standard most people will be ok with. After that ill follow it through to the end of the episode which will take me a long while longer.

Heres a link http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/5fa37c46b3d48048789318c97c0892ab

so tell me what you think, what you like and dislike mind. Ide like some constructive criticism to help me improve, before i go further, and perhaps some suggestions for techniques to improve upon what i have already, would be great as well, namely one thing im looking for is a way to keep things moving like hand gestures and body language, during extended monologues.

anyway, thanks for watching.