Feedback on my first Madness anim?

[Hizu]

Hi. I just submitted this. It's my first Madness Day and I'd really appreciate feedback on it. The good, the bad, anything at all. Thanks for taking the time to read this.

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  Kyouki - Madness in Japan by Hizu

  Relentlessly bloody Madness action set in Japan

  Score

  Under Judgment

  Type

  Movie

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  Rated

  Ages 17+

[KhanhCPham]

Congrats hizu for being the madness winner

[kkots]

Read reviews. All feedback is there.

[Hizu]

At 10/6/13 05:09 AM, kkots wrote: Read reviews. All feedback is there.

I hope you realize this was posted before it had any reviews?

[kkots]

At 10/6/13 12:58 PM, Hizu wrote: I hope you realize this was posted before it had any reviews?

You mean you posted this to quickly get feedback and make fixes to your animation before the judgement was made? What was the point of asking for feedback here instantly after submitting?
I was fortunate enough to have Deshiel and a co-animator, so I sent letters to them before submitting, to know if everything was working fine for them. Only Deshiel responded, positively, and after that I submitted. My point is that you should ask friends for feedback before submitting, if you'd like to quickly fix some obvious errors that you didn't notice.

[KhanhCPham]

At 10/6/13 01:37 PM, kkots wrote:

At 10/6/13 12:58 PM, Hizu wrote: I hope you realize this was posted before it had any reviews?

You mean you posted this to quickly get feedback and make fixes to your animation before the judgement was made? What was the point of asking for feedback here instantly after submitting?
I was fortunate enough to have Deshiel and a co-animator, so I sent letters to them before submitting, to know if everything was working fine for them. Only Deshiel responded, positively, and after that I submitted. My point is that you should ask friends for feedback before submitting, if you'd like to quickly fix some obvious errors that you didn't notice.

That maybe true but at the same time the review gives input from mainly casual reviewers. The forum is here is more aim for actual animators for input. Its good to have two point of views. This post might just to gather to input from another perspective and that is all. He can choose what input he wants to take in the future. I dont see a problem getting feedback whether its before or after posted. There is no problem asking feedback. It could still find good feedback that the creator didnt realize before.

Alright back to animating.

[Hizu]

^

Everything he said.