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Would love some feedback 2013-08-26 10:18:23 Reply

I've been making some pixel concept art for a game my friends are making, I just want some feedback.

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Response to Would love some feedback 2013-08-26 10:53:55 Reply

At 8/26/13 10:18 AM, mim31 wrote: I've been making some pixel concept art for a game my friends are making, I just want some feedback.

I'm having trouble making out the different elements of your composition, so you may want to make that clearer.

From what I can tell the game is about a dinosaur? or possibly a robot? or maybe a no-hands, square-hatted person? I can't really tell much about who they are or why they're important.

I like the idea of the three coloured background, as well as the icons, but is there any reason as to why they're cut unevenly? Additionally the robot's leg cuts right in the middle of an icon, so it's hard to tell what that is supposed to represent as well.

I like how you did the "cables" or whatever sticking out of the robots back - the ones with no black border. I think you may want to consider sticking to that style with the rest as well for more consistency.


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Response to Would love some feedback 2013-08-26 21:23:26 Reply

Thanks a lot man! I'll be sure to take in to consideration what you said