Help knowing if good

[coldplayguy77]

I need to know if this first chapter is any good and the tittle of the book until further notice is "They Went Home" give me the truth about how good it is if its shitty in ur opinion leave a comment if its the holy grial which i doubt leave a coomet so here chapter one
Chapter One First Outbreak
As she laid there so still he started to cry, Why?....jus…jus….just why you. Why you! …Sniff….just why. Then he looked at John and yelled, Why did you shot her…WHY!!! John astonished at what just happened in term of events he said, I didn’t Know it was her…..Eli….I’m…I’m sorry. I thought she was one of them. I mean its pitch dark in here how was I supposed to know said John. Eli aroused from the fresh corpse and screamed, She was our only hope now there is no hope. Then it Went Silent But They Started to walk towards the house they were the dead. Eli and John started to run to the back door hoping that they could make it out in time the dead started to run after them in droves. Today they were going to follow them Home. 5 Years Earlier
Eli Is watching the TV and breaking news report happens he wasn’t interested so he only caught a couple of words from here to there until the news anchor said, and today in Italy the outbreak of virus Z has spread to Florence putting Italy into Martial law. But Eli shrugged it off and went on with his daily life. You know doing dishes, cleaning the clothes, checking his email and so on. Around 1:40 his phone went off Eli didn’t catch it in time so he checked the message left and it was a call from mom she said kind of quietly (which was weird because she has been losing here hearing)the message went on to say, Eli did you see the news these morning kind of makes me sad but you know you should talk to your step-brother. You and John need to be together more maybe go to the fair oh.. that reminds me Eli you should check to see if the fair is soon. But you need to go online to che…. . The machine said, Message ends. That’s strange why did it cut the message. But Eli shrugged it off and went online to put his new record on his site Hijacked Dubstep to put up his new album “Praying with his Friends” For a limited time five dollars. Put in the year of album which was 2019 date 7/24 all that little stuff. Then he went on his favorite news site and quoted to say” The Frist American Outbreak of Viruses Z” Eli left to get a drink and when he returned the site said, site shut down by F.B.I Until further notices. Eli said fearfully, Hiding the fact you can keep us safe dam government shits. Always trying to hide your mistakes not anymore. Eli went on to hijack the site and reopen within fifteen minutes the news was all over this news. Thus started the Great Dispair.