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The Living Planet 2013-07-12 21:48:01 Reply

Just a bit of story fodder I've had stored on my computer for a few years. I like blending reality with highly improbable fantasy. Tell me what you think of this idea.

Pangea, the ultra-continent, wasnâEUTMt a continent amidst an ocean. It was, and is, the shell of an egg that separated as its inner-space expanded. When the pantheon gave birth to the planets, it planned for them all to be fertile and embody the essences of life and creation, as a parent wishes for their children. The pantheon intended to pass down its experiences and perpetuate its existence through proliferation. It does this because the pantheon is a construct, a child, of natural origin and so is bound by the principle tennates of the natural world of creation, life, and death.

Whether done with a glimmer of sentience or not, the pantheon created progeny and scattered them to the winds, to grow and bask in the glory of the cycles of life. The earth is one such creature. It is one of the progenies of our father pantheon and contains within it the information and instincts with which it was borne.

Riding upon the winds of the universe, the sperm of the pantheon, which even now we see hovering over us at night, fertilized the egg we now see beneath our feet. We, humanity, were born from the immense life that was given to our mother planet and survive on the products of her gestation. These creating acts are to be known as Alpha creation acts and characterized by an organism creating life that is not like them in form nor function. As the pantheon created matter, and earth created man, man must give birth to another form. All creations inherit their creatorâEUTMs will to create. It drives us to study the ways of our Alpha ancestry in order to fulfill our purpose as humans and feel complete.


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Response to The Living Planet 2013-07-12 21:54:19 Reply

Also, for anyone interested, I do have a website with some of my writing. I love visitors!

www.vicerolives.com


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Response to The Living Planet 2013-07-13 01:07:16 Reply

Near the end of that passage my imagination just went wild. This is classic. This is the type of stuff that spawns epic stories. This IS just the beginning of an epic story, right?

I'm thinking the penultimate story here could be sci-fi, with mechs and whatnot. That is what us humans are creating, after all. Would be beautiful to read a story like that, where the mecha are the products of destiny or some such. Perfect blend of sci-fi and fantasy.


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