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Sinful Artwork 2013-07-03 21:15:32 Reply

Hi, I am looking for as much feedback as possible on my artwork. Anything goes, really. If you must know, I kind of freestyle my work. I'm not exactly defined by any genre, but since I am working on erotica, well...You get the idea. Anyway, please leave comments and such. Thankies!

Here's my first contribution for you guys.

My anatomy might need some work, though. Feel free to red line it if you need to. :)

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-03 21:20:27 Reply

Here's some pussy-munching action for you guys. Between two ladies! I'll post some more, tomorrow.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-04 08:22:06 Reply

This stuff reminds me of a certain someone.. However I'll try not to derail the thread or accuse anyone (or reveal hidden identities).
I think the stuff would look better if you played with the levels a bit in photoshop after you've scanned them, make 'em pop a bit more from the page.
I also think you should be careful not to make women's waists too small, it's easy to overdo it, and it makes them look incredibely fragile.
I also recommend looking up how to draw wings, because the ones on the angel look pretty weird. Nothing wrong with having a picture of a bird's wing next to you when you're drawing it.


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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-04 08:43:21 Reply

At 7/4/13 08:22 AM, Breaktroll wrote: I think the stuff would look better if you played with the levels a bit in photoshop after you've scanned them, make 'em pop a bit more from the page.
I also think you should be careful not to make women's waists too small, it's easy to overdo it, and it makes them look incredibely fragile.
I also recommend looking up how to draw wings, because the ones on the angel look pretty weird. Nothing wrong with having a picture of a bird's wing next to you when you're drawing it.

I don't have my old computer yet, so unfortunately, I cannot play with any levels just yet. As for everything else, the wings especially, yeah, I can fix that, no problem. ;)

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-04 09:04:35 Reply

Well, I took BreakTroll's feedback and went back, Googled a bird's wing and followed the diagram as best as I could. I am not sure if it's 100% correct, but it was worth a shot.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-04 09:13:26 Reply

Warning: The next pic will be of two women, but if you think I will just draw women, then...Prepare for a shocker. And if you're aroused by the pic AFTER the two women I am about to post in a few minutes, you might be gay.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-04 09:36:41 Reply

The piece before I draw the "Shocker".

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-04 10:32:56 Reply

BAM! Half nekkid dude!

In terms of dudes, I'm going to start out slow in terms of suggestive-ness. Maybe next time, I'll draw him in a speedo...I'm secure enough in my own masculinity to be comfortable drawing this, by the way.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-04 17:08:31 Reply

At 7/4/13 10:32 AM, SinCOMIXXX wrote: BAM! Half nekkid dude!

And, once again, the male you've drawn is extremely effeminate in physical features. Draw in some larger breasts, and boom, it's how you draw women.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-04 20:30:33 Reply

At 7/4/13 05:08 PM, bigjonny13 wrote:
At 7/4/13 10:32 AM, SinCOMIXXX wrote: BAM! Half nekkid dude!
And, once again, the male you've drawn is extremely effeminate in physical features. Draw in some larger breasts, and boom, it's how you draw women.

Huh...Okay, well I'll try and work on that.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-05 09:08:34 Reply

The good news is i see improvement, the bad news is you've still got alot of work to do on your anatomy, even with all the stylization. Out of all the things the bother me though are the weightlessness of the breasts. If you want to do pornography, make sure you give a feeling of heft to the breasts and know human anatomy like the back of your hand. All things considered though these look alot better, but your attitude about gay people and themes needs improving, thats going to hold you back if you ever want to make money doing this sort of thing.


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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-05 10:34:21 Reply

At 7/5/13 09:08 AM, Template88 wrote: The good news is i see improvement, the bad news is you've still got alot of work to do on your anatomy, even with all the stylization. Out of all the things the bother me though are the weightlessness of the breasts. If you want to do pornography, make sure you give a feeling of heft to the breasts and know human anatomy like the back of your hand. All things considered though these look alot better, but your attitude about gay people and themes needs improving, thats going to hold you back if you ever want to make money doing this sort of thing.

What do you mean my attitude about gay people? I'm sorry, but could you explain that a little better? I don't understand that part of your comment. If you could clarify that part of it, that would be wonderful. Everything else I understand.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-05 10:42:31 Reply

At 7/5/13 10:34 AM, SinCOMIXXX wrote: What do you mean my attitude about gay people? I'm sorry, but could you explain that a little better?

You're certainly implying homosexuality is somewhat... sinful.

If someone doesn't back me up with an "ooooooh!" I WILL MURDER A FUCKING PORCUPINE.

There's nothing wrong with effeminate males (yes there is, but artistically speaking) but try out different body types on both your guys and your gals.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-05 10:47:35 Reply

At 7/5/13 10:42 AM, Lintire wrote:
At 7/5/13 10:34 AM, SinCOMIXXX wrote: What do you mean my attitude about gay people? I'm sorry, but could you explain that a little better?
You're certainly implying homosexuality is somewhat... sinful.

Well, the whole theme of my page is "sex is sinful, fun and awesome". I certainly don't mean for homosexuality to portrayed as sinful, but I could see how it comes off that way, given that my main character is a succubus.

And as for the effeminate male part of this, I'm not going to draw just effeminate males. Also, I might try to throw some BBWs into the mix sometime later. I see your point with wanting me to be more well-rounded in terms of body-types, and I will certainly look into that. However, I must cut this chat short at the moment, because I have to get ready for work. Again, I appreciate the feedback.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-05 10:54:24 Reply

At 7/5/13 10:42 AM, Lintire wrote:
You're certainly implying homosexuality is somewhat... sinful.

I don't really see how he did.. The sinful thing was referncing the whole porn thing.
However the whole "shocker" thing was pretty weird. Acting like male nudity is somehow more weird than lesbian stuff.
You know, Kiwi (calling you that for ease's sake), it's alright if you're uncomfortable with drawing males, you don't have to lie about it.
But it will get in the way of your artistic development if you really want to get further.
And as was said before me, it's best if you try different body builds for both males and females. All your females pretty much look the same, and your dude was pretty much a girl with flat breasts.


Try not being a bitch for once, huh?

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-05 17:12:25 Reply

At 7/4/13 10:32 AM, SinCOMIXXX wrote: BAM! Half nekkid dude!

In terms of dudes, I'm going to start out slow in terms of suggestive-ness. Maybe next time, I'll draw him in a speedo...I'm secure enough in my own masculinity to be comfortable drawing this, by the way.

thats a dude? thats a chick


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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-05 21:35:54 Reply

At 7/5/13 10:54 AM, Breaktroll wrote:
At 7/5/13 10:42 AM, Lintire wrote:
You're certainly implying homosexuality is somewhat... sinful.
I don't really see how he did.. The sinful thing was referncing the whole porn thing.
All your females pretty much look the same, and your dude was pretty much a girl with flat breasts.

Understandable, which is why I will develop characters of different bust sizes and body types (I know some people have a fat fetish, so yeah...). Again, I understand you wanting me to be well-rounded and I respect that. If you'll excuse me, I have a slightly overweight woman to draw.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-12 10:00:44 Reply

Well, I drew characters of different body types...In the same picture. I would upload the digital painting of Elyria and the Angel, buuuuuuuut...It sucks, and I need to really work on my shading. If anyone has any tutorials on digital painting shading, please, PLEASE help me out.

The characters in this pic are:

Fiona, the small-breasted woman, and Hilda, the heavy-set woman.
As the notes suggest, Hilda only has one horn, and dark-red skin, and Fiona has light blue skin.

I'm quite fond of this one, and if I can make one major bit of criticism toward it, it would be the length of Fiona's body. Perhaps this issue can be resolved in later drawings of her.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-12 10:48:15 Reply

In a matter of a half-hour, I gathered the courage to post this piece, knowing full well someone will blow it apart. Anyway, if anyone has any tutorials on improving the shading of this piece, because trust me, I would like to re-do the shading, that would be WONDERFULLY helpful. So, please. Help me in any way you can.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-12 10:50:26 Reply

At 7/12/13 10:48 AM, SinCOMIXXX wrote:

I forgot to upload the piece...Oh well, here it is.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-13 10:57:43 Reply

Sweet. Hiryu, you've made a lot of progress in your months away- this is the first piece I've seen from you that looks "finished". You've thought about the composition and your color choices work well.

That said, the hair on the left girl could use some work- the way it bunches around the elbow is not convincing. Lighting wise, harsher shadows on the bottoms of things will help make the scene more convincing. You're still also behaving as if lesbians exist expressly for your sexual pleasure, which is weird and kind of creepy.


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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-13 12:46:24 Reply

At 7/12/13 10:00 AM, SinCOMIXXX wrote: Well, I drew characters of different body types...In the same picture. I would upload the digital painting of Elyria and the Angel, buuuuuuuut...It sucks, and I need to really work on my shading. If anyone has any tutorials on digital painting shading, please, PLEASE help me out.
Fiona, the small-breasted woman, and Hilda, the heavy-set woman.
As the notes suggest, Hilda only has one horn, and dark-red skin, and Fiona has light blue skin.

They are the same body type. One is just slightly thinner and smaller, and not blue or whatever.

THISis a skinny small breasted chick.
THISis a heavy set chick
THISis NOT a heavy set chick.

See where this is going? Making one character proportionately larger doesnt make them a different body type. Different body types have rather drastically different body features (much rounder vs much more angular for example). Also notice that the heavy set girl IS NOT OBESE, i wouldnt even call her fat for that matter either. If you want that, THISis a fat/obese chick. Big difference. Try drawing one of those, its actually much more interesting and better for your skills than generic bland "hot" girls.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-14 03:08:43 Reply

At 7/12/13 10:50 AM, SinCOMIXXX wrote:
At 7/12/13 10:48 AM, SinCOMIXXX wrote:
I forgot to upload the piece...Oh well, here it is.

Not a bad job on the shading man, especially since you're probably pretty new to this. Once quick suggestion is that if you want to make their outfits appear more like latex or reflective use the full spectrum of value from black to white. Here are some tutorial by adams hughes, it's not digital but the same basic principle is there. The man is a master when it come to drawing women. http://www.copicmarker.com/free-art-lessons-by-adam-hughes

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-14 03:40:55 Reply

Nice art! And colored is much better!

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-14 12:26:47 Reply

At 7/13/13 12:46 PM, ornery wrote:
At 7/12/13 10:00 AM, SinCOMIXXX wrote:
THISis a skinny small breasted chick.
THISis a heavy set chick
THISis NOT a heavy set chick.

See where this is going? Making one character proportionately larger doesnt make them a different body type. Different body types have rather drastically different body features (much rounder vs much more angular for example).

I'll keep these in mind, Ornery. Thank you for your time and feedback. :)

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-07-14 12:28:54 Reply

At 7/14/13 03:08 AM, bigCman321 wrote:
At 7/12/13 10:50 AM, SinCOMIXXX wrote:
At 7/12/13 10:48 AM, SinCOMIXXX wrote:
I forgot to upload the piece...Oh well, here it is.
Not a bad job on the shading man, especially since you're probably pretty new to this. Once quick suggestion is that if you want to make their outfits appear more like latex or reflective use the full spectrum of value from black to white. Here are some tutorial by adams hughes, it's not digital but the same basic principle is there. The man is a master when it come to drawing women. http://www.copicmarker.com/free-art-lessons-by-adam-hughes

I feel as if the shading could use a drastic improvement, but if you say so, then thanks. I will definitely check out the link. I don't want to do too much on my grandmother's computer, since mine has yet to get internet access, because her connection is wired, so when we get that set up, I will definitely be able to check out way more stuff. Besides, her computer is God-Awful slow.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-08-08 10:55:54 Reply

Sorry I've been away for a while. Here's a treat for you all.

These are gauges for a fighting game concept of some sort. I decided to go simple this time, and I think chrome was a really good color choice.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-08-08 11:00:17 Reply

Her boobs are balloons...Heh...Oh well. She's at least somewhat bigger than normal. I am slowly going out of my comfort zone.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-08-08 11:07:04 Reply

Arachne. She's a spider queen. Nuff said.

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Response to Sinful Artwork 2013-08-08 16:59:40 Reply

There is no shortcut to sexy.
The usage of shading inappropriately is a way to hide one's lack of understanding of volume when it can be represented simply with lines.
If you can translate that same control of energy you have for your signature into creating simplified figures then that would be a great leap forward.

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