At 6/20/13 08:19 PM, TheToonTower wrote:
I made this 4 minute animation and i was just wondering what you guys thought about it. Anything that might help me make it better would be great.
You should post in the portal where it guarantees at least 200 views and more chances of feedback. The animation work is not bad but you need to time your scenes much better. Some scenes drag out for too long. You might have to cut of portions of already animated parts but it would make the pacing much better.