Mein Art Aka I'm New+not So Smart

[Monoklo]

I have a vision my friend...
a vision that i shouldn't be held responsible for my stupidity

Feel free to comment I'm deeply in need of friends :P

http://art.ngfiles.com/images/210/monoklo_spongecazed.jpg

[LeeIsMyName]

Most people aren't going to take the time to click a link. You're better off attaching the pictures to your post.

[Monoklo]

thank you very much for the advice :D I tought of it but I didn't know how to edit my post O.O
here is my newest drawing. :3

[Banzanimation]

its pretty good, but i cant quite tell if its a female or a male.

But anyway good job!

[Monoklo]

At 5/29/13 09:30 PM, Banzanimation wrote: its pretty good, but i cant quite tell if its a female or a male.

But anyway good job!

yeah Ahah you are not the only one to say that...

on the other hand more stuff! my manga! much higher resolution images on my dev:
http://monoklo.deviantart.com/gallery/44062422

[Monoklo]

Here's page 2

:3

[Monoklo]

here comes page 3... it's sort of mediocre I'll do better on the next pages

[Spedmallet]

My biggest issue with your comics is that the characters are generally posed lifelessly/forcefully. Dunno if you follow, but essentially they just seem very unnaturally posed and board-like. Try exploring some figure drawing and different poses. Maybe take some photos, either of yourself or stock photos, and draw human figures from reference rather than freehand. Consider getting a drawing mannequin if you don't have one; mine isn't perfect but it helps a lot. I use it before I start drawing to get a good idea of exactly what pose I want to create, rather than winging it and going along as I draw.

[Monoklo]

At 6/9/13 11:30 AM, Spedmallet wrote: My biggest issue with your comics is that the characters are generally posed lifelessly/forcefully. Dunno if you follow, but essentially they just seem very unnaturally posed and board-like. Try exploring some figure drawing and different poses. Maybe take some photos, either of yourself or stock photos, and draw human figures from reference rather than freehand. Consider getting a drawing mannequin if you don't have one; mine isn't perfect but it helps a lot. I use it before I start drawing to get a good idea of exactly what pose I want to create, rather than winging it and going along as I draw.

Great advice, I already noticed tho. I think it's a huge problem I had with page 3 (and a bit less with page 1). I'm always working on my pose improvement problem but I get to focus on things like backgrounds which take a lot of my time. You might see my will to improve on my background skills on the upcoming pages. For the mannequin advice... funny I ordered a figma a week and a half ago. I've never been a huge fan of art mannequin because there poses usualy suck but it sounds like it is not the case for those action figures.

I have a question for you did you see any issue with the text in those pages I'm always pretty akward about my grammar and stuff. xD

[Spedmallet]

At 6/9/13 03:48 PM, Monoklo wrote: I have a question for you did you see any issue with the text in those pages I'm always pretty akward about my grammar and stuff. xD

didn't read it lel

[Monoklo]

At 6/9/13 04:00 PM, Spedmallet wrote:

At 6/9/13 03:48 PM, Monoklo wrote: I have a question for you did you see any issue with the text in those pages I'm always pretty akward about my grammar and stuff. xD

didn't read it lel

TT_TT

HEY I GOT THE HANG OF UPLOADING STUFF TO THE INTERNET! xD resolution is no longer a problem for me :D

Also I won't upload my comics here any longer since I made a website for it might want to check this up every saturday:
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http://dumb-beetles.smackjeeves.com/comics/1754259/p-1/