The humour reminds me of Antics, i do enjoy it very much.
About the art, i dont think it will be a problem, but you have to watch out the colors and patterns because there are panels that its impossible to figure out whats going on. You need to separate better the background from the characters, better contrast and desaturate a notch. Also, the size bothers me a little, i think the pixel proportion is ok, but the panels dont need to be that big. Having to scroll, in any direction, is not good for webcomics.