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BoneyMaroney
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Looking for Feedback on some art 2013-05-07 01:26:08 Reply

I drew this little sketch and then decided to share it with you guys.

I'm not exactly sure how good it is so it would be nice to get some
Feedback on it.

Im not sure if I should finish it or just scrap it because I'm not really sure how I feel about it.

Heres the link since I can't upload to the forums for some reason..

http://cynicalfruit.newgrounds.com/news/post/841552

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Response to Looking for Feedback on some art 2013-05-07 02:49:12 Reply

At 5/7/13 01:26 AM, CynicalFruit wrote: I drew this little sketch and then decided to share it with you guys.

So cold and lonely..

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Response to Looking for Feedback on some art 2013-05-07 03:06:48 Reply

At 5/7/13 02:49 AM, CynicalFruit wrote:
At 5/7/13 01:26 AM, CynicalFruit wrote: I drew this little sketch and then decided to share it with you guys.
So cold and lonely..

hey there! From the little you're showing it looks like your sketch is moving in the right direction. I know it's just a sketch, but in order for us to properly critique it we still need to see the whole thing.

But based on what you're showing, I would take another look at how his neck connects to his ear/jaw area, looks really flat. Actually if you scroll all the way down on any of these newgrounds pages, the guy at the bottom right of the screen is a good example of how that area should connect. Other than that just eep on truckin sir!

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Response to Looking for Feedback on some art 2013-05-07 03:23:34 Reply

At 5/7/13 03:06 AM, kid-scribbles wrote:
At 5/7/13 02:49 AM, CynicalFruit wrote:
At 5/7/13 01:26 AM, CynicalFruit wrote:
But based on what you're showing, I would take another look at how his neck connects to his ear/jaw area, looks really flat.

Thank you very much,i appreciate your help!

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Response to Looking for Feedback on some art 2013-05-07 03:56:08 Reply

At 5/7/13 03:23 AM, CynicalFruit wrote:
At 5/7/13 03:06 AM, kid-scribbles wrote:
At 5/7/13 02:49 AM, CynicalFruit wrote:
At 5/7/13 01:26 AM, CynicalFruit wrote:
But based on what you're showing, I would take another look at how his neck connects to his ear/jaw area, looks really flat.
Thank you very much,i appreciate your help!

Thank you for responding to my forum post and helping me out.
I did my best to fix the issue with the jawline.I used a couple references to do so though.
I'm not exactly sure if I fixed it,but it looks better than before.It seems il have to brish up on my anatomy and shading.

Again,thank you.