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ShoZ
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Whaddaya think? 2013-04-30 05:45:22 Reply

first animation project ever! heres a little preview:

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/15d6fb411595536c1b5d1d1a 90eaa1cb

what do you guys think of it so far? every feedback is helpful :)

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Response to Whaddaya think? 2013-04-30 15:14:17 Reply

So far so good! You may want to add a bit more easing in, things start and stop dead very quickly. Just a few frames easing and settling will make things look much smoother. Good luck with it!

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Response to Whaddaya think? 2013-04-30 16:16:11 Reply
At 4/30/13 03:14 PM, JKR wrote: So far so good! You may want to add a bit more easing in, things start and stop dead very quickly. Just a few frames easing and settling will make things look much smoother. Good luck with it!

thanks! also your website is very helpful! but still i got problems with body propotions...

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Response to Whaddaya think? 2013-04-30 16:24:51 Reply

I want the character to walk up and open the box instead of the sudden cut of opening the box. Thats just a nitpick of mine though and the scene could still work with some sound design.

Currently doing short rough animations here http://khanhcpham.deviantart.com/

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Response to Whaddaya think? 2013-04-30 16:51:06 Reply
At 4/30/13 04:24 PM, KhanhCPham wrote: I want the character to walk up and open the box instead of the sudden cut of opening the box. Thats just a nitpick of mine though and the scene could still work with some sound design.

Actually i was going to do it like that but i had big issues with the body proportion and look of the character...so i did it like that (i know its pretty lame) but im practicing that :) walking animation and character design

Thanks for the feedback!