A poem about teachers

[Ilumnia]

~Teachers~

Sweet teachers
Whom lights our hearts with smile
And words which ease our pain
We love you

Dutiful teachers
Whom gives us knowledge
And guide us lost ones
We thank you

Strict teachers
Whom right our wrongs
And drill us hard in exams
We appreciate you

Kind teachers
Whom love us all equaly
And support us in our dream
We love you

* I plan on having it published in my school's magazine but I'm not sure if it'll be good so please share your thoughts. Thanks for reading. ^^

[hopeless87]

sweet = )

[chiptune]

You should definitely publish it, teachers deserve so much more love than they get most of the time :)

[Ilumnia]

Thanks for the comments I'll definately get it published. ><

[MiNDxCLoUD]

I predict that you wil someday deliver the speech at your graduation, whenever that may be.

At 4/18/13 03:09 PM, Ilumnia wrote: ~Teachers~

Sweet teachers
Whom lights our hearts with smile
And words which ease our pain
We love you

Dutiful teachers
Whom gives us knowledge
And guide us lost ones
We thank you

Strict teachers
Whom right our wrongs
And drill us hard in exams
We appreciate you

Kind teachers
Whom love us all equaly
And support us in our dream
We love you

* I plan on having it published in my school's magazine but I'm not sure if it'll be good so please share your thoughts. Thanks for reading. ^^

[Tediisan]

It's nice to see something that doesn't involve bashing of teachers for once. I think teachers would really appreciate a poem like that

[Dr-Worm]

That's a very sweet sentiment and I'm sure they'd appreciate it.

On the other hand, if you replace every instance of the word "teachers" with "Kim Jong-Un" it sounds like a DPRK propaganda song.