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Art of Nempatriarch 2013-04-17 00:39:48 Reply

Hello! I'm Nempatriarch and i'm here to show you some of my work and hopefully get some critique and pointers.

I'm a freelance artist and i am currently developing my own indie game with a friend of mine, but i am having struggle with money so i am also accepting advice in this matter as well.

and that's it, i hope you like it!

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  • The Zabrak Droid
    The Zabrak Droid by Nempatriarch

    This illustration was a commission about a Zabrak storm trooper who took a similar path to Grievous.

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  • Ivicus
    Ivicus by Nempatriarch

    Original character design. I think the word "Ivicus" has no meaning. Please correct me if i'm wrong.

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  • Demon
    Demon by Nempatriarch

    Concept illustration

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  • Trooper
    Trooper by Nempatriarch

    Zabrak stormtrooper commission

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-04-17 15:13:04 Reply

Here comes another one!

  • Hydralisk
    Hydralisk by Nempatriarch

    Fanart

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-04-17 19:49:51 Reply

  • Crimson
    Crimson by Nempatriarch

    An old drawing, character design

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-04-17 20:41:58 Reply

At 4/17/13 07:49 PM, Nempatriarch wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/nempatriarch/crimson

You've got some great images here.
However, I suggest including the image in your thread, it is a showcase thread after all, but please feel free to link out to the better resolution version in the art portal.

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-04-18 13:38:16 Reply

At 4/17/13 08:41 PM, bigjonny13 wrote:
At 4/17/13 07:49 PM, Nempatriarch wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/nempatriarch/crimson
You've got some great images here.
However, I suggest including the image in your thread, it is a showcase thread after all, but please feel free to link out to the better resolution version in the art portal.

Thank you! youre right, i'll do that

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-04-18 13:40:11 Reply

The second one

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-04-18 13:41:25 Reply

And the third

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-04-23 14:03:37 Reply

*bump*

  • Concept Art
    Concept Art by Nempatriarch

    Concept art for upcoming indie title PSYBLOCKS by user discmach

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-04-28 13:13:43 Reply

*bump again* I'd love some critique so i can improve.

  • Concept Art 2
    Concept Art 2 by Nempatriarch

    Concept art for upcoming indie title PSYBLOCKS by user discmach

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-04-28 13:50:27 Reply

At 4/28/13 01:13 PM, Nempatriarch wrote: *bump again* I'd love some critique so i can improve.
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/nempatriarch/concept-art-

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I'm glad you bumped this, because I completely missed this thread and it's awesome.
Critique wise I think the crotch of the robot seems a little high compared to his arms and legs. Technique wise I don't have much to remark upon.


Try not being a bitch for once, huh?

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-04-28 20:26:55 Reply

At 4/28/13 01:50 PM, Breaktroll wrote: I'm glad you bumped this, because I completely missed this thread and it's awesome.
Critique wise I think the crotch of the robot seems a little high compared to his arms and legs. Technique wise I don't have much to remark upon.

Thank you! glad you like them.

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-05-01 23:18:25 Reply

*Bump*

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-05-02 17:02:28 Reply

Bump again. I'm sorry i keep doing this, but i would really like to get some feedback/critique from you guys. This has been hard for me to take since i started to upload my work to the internet, but i need it to keep improving.

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-05-08 17:28:40 Reply

Another one!

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-05-08 20:06:57 Reply

At 5/1/13 11:18 PM, Nempatriarch wrote: *Bump*

Oh gosh I really like this worm. You really have a knack for details and fine things. One of my biggest cases of feedback I have to point out is some of the stuff looks a little stiff. It can be really hard to fit in details and keep a flow, I know, it's something I still have difficulty with myself. If you don't already, sometimes gesture drawing practice can help with creating movement.

At 4/28/13 01:13 PM, Nempatriarch wrote: *bump again* I'd love some critique so i can improve.
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/nempatriarch/concept-art-

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I was wondering on this, if it was purposeful to have the two legs set up differently. Does it have to do with a specific function or was that just how you decided to to render it?

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-05-08 23:20:00 Reply

At 5/8/13 08:06 PM, Armaina wrote:
Oh gosh I really like this worm. You really have a knack for details and fine things. One of my biggest cases of feedback I have to point out is some of the stuff looks a little stiff. It can be really hard to fit in details and keep a flow, I know, it's something I still have difficulty with myself. If you don't already, sometimes gesture drawing practice can help with creating movement.

Thank you! You are totally right about that, i find it hard do do dynamic poses or something that looks natural. I'll take your advice about gesture drawing practice. I'm an animator as well, so i think this is something i really must get right at once.

At 5/8/13 08:06 PM, Armaina wrote:
I was wondering on this, if it was purposeful to have the two legs set up differently. Does it have to do with a specific function or was that just how you decided to to render it?

It was sort of on purpose, since i never plan ahead this many details. I throw some basic lines and then i start rendering over the sketch until i'm happy with the result. But it has no function, other than that i like it this way. I'm still experimenting with my work method so i go back and forth a lot.

Thank you for your post.

P.D: You have great art in your gallery, i'll give it a look if you dont mind.

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-05-09 11:27:26 Reply

At 4/18/13 01:41 PM, Nempatriarch wrote: And the third

Wow dude... You obviously know a thing or two (or 500) about drawing and digital art so there isn't a whole lot I could personally tell you, other than your stuff is amazing and you got tight skills. Keep up the great work man.

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-05-09 13:09:29 Reply

At 5/9/13 11:27 AM, LeffsHanid wrote:
At 4/18/13 01:41 PM, Nempatriarch wrote: And the third
Wow dude... You obviously know a thing or two (or 500) about drawing and digital art so there isn't a whole lot I could personally tell you, other than your stuff is amazing and you got tight skills. Keep up the great work man.

Thank you. Dont hold back if you think you have something to tell me. Any critique will be helpful, and the more people i get to do it the better since it will show what's the common errors that stand out from my work.

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-05-11 18:02:20 Reply

Another one

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-05-23 18:14:00 Reply

Bump

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-06-13 20:20:08 Reply

New one!

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2013-06-24 15:46:25 Reply

New one!

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Response to Art of Nempatriarch 2014-05-14 19:36:43 Reply

Been away for some time, lets bump this. Any critique is welcomed!

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