At 5/4/13 06:36 PM, NATA wrote:
@ artistuknown - The beginning of your entry was okay, but it quickly went into a sloppy animatic in which I could barely even tell what was happening. The concept of "Birth Day" was odd and I didn't see how it could be considered a new holiday and there wasn't much explanation behind it. I'm also fairly sure your entry also has copyright music.
I guess mine was a bit confusing. While "Birth Day" was the holiday being celebrated, the "new holiday" in mine was the tyrant coming to end their holiday and introduce "death day", the assistant even did a thumbs up to hint at the theme, but i can see how it wouldn't be too apparent, especially with the horrible animatic. It's a lame concept, I know, but it's all I could come up with at the time. If it was actually finished, I'm sure it would have been apparent, but my computer died so I couldn't finish :/. Thanks for the feedback though. And no, there wasn't any copyrighted music in mine, all Royalty Free music: most of it was by Kevin MacLeod, except for one piece by Royalty Free Kings.