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HaloSimon
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Lock n Load 2013-03-07 10:37:54 Reply

Hi, I am doing a 3D animation for my game intro. If you are interested in this, please come to the link below and give feedback and comment.

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Response to Lock n Load 2013-03-07 14:04:03 Reply
At 3/7/13 10:37 AM, HaloSimon wrote: Hi, I am doing a 3D animation for my game intro. If you are interested in this, please come to the link below and give feedback and comment.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/612616

looks like a good start. some of the movements are a bit stiff/need to be eased. and your grammar can use some work in some spots. try using a more dramatic camera and less still shots and you'll have a much better piece

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Response to Lock n Load 2013-03-08 01:30:20 Reply
looks like a good start. some of the movements are a bit stiff/need to be eased. and your grammar can use some work in some spots. try using a more dramatic camera and less still shots and you'll have a much better piece

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