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AmericanZero
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album lyrics I'm working on 2013-02-24 17:08:32 Reply

1.
lost inside my open mind
in hopes to find the right song this time
to sing to you, until you're dead
that same ole song n' dance again
lost inside my open mind
in hopes to find the right song this time
to sing to you, until you're dead
that same ole song n' dance again

who's to say that you're right?
who's to say that I'm wrong..
who's to say that we're here
who's there
who's there
is there anyone at all
anyone at all
I beg you answer this call
'cause I will wait around
until the end of time

then fall in love, with you again
through all the pain n' joy my friend
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lost inside my open mind
in hopes to find the right song this time
to sing to you, until you're dead
that same ole song n' dance again
lost inside my open mind
in hopes to find the right song this time
to sing to you, until you're dead
that same ole song n' dance again

2.
dysfunction
I'm in love
my moms son
my dads gun
I'm running
in circles
I'm in love
love hurts though
I'm broken
I promise
If I could
I'd stop this
dysfunction
destruction
then justice
construction

3.
this song is to,
my friends and family
the good times n' the bad ones
n' all times in between

this song is to,
my girlfriend and her mom
sometimes I think you're cool
sometimes I think you're not

this song is to,
me myself n' I
sometimes I love you
sometimes I want to die

this song is to,
god..god..god..
I'm tired of asking question
I just want to know why


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Response to album lyrics I'm working on 2013-02-25 14:33:50 Reply

I love the first song, the rythm of the words work really well. I could easily put a tune to them without diffeculty because it just works! I'm not a song writer so sorry i can't better criticise. I only know the first one is my favourite! :)
As for the last song, the last two lines, PM me and i'll tell ya the answers ;)