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Character description: Metal chick Feb. 23rd, 2013 @ 07:08 PM Reply

This is the metal chick that any guy would want. She listens to tons of metal bands of all kinds of genres. Genres would include traditional metal, speed metal, thrash metal, death metal, black metal, groove metal, doom metal, progressive metal, power metal, gothic metal, symphonic metal, folk metal, and so many others. She'd even listen to bands of more commercialized genres, like glam metal, nu metal (some bands), and metalcore.

The non-metal genres she would listen to would include classical, jazz, classic rock, hard rock, stoner rock, alternative rock, grunge, punk rock, crust punk, hardcore, grindcore, synthpop, darkwave, industrial, and electronic dance music (including techno, trance, drum n bass, gabber, etc). The only pop, rap, and country artists she'd listen to are Michael Jackson, Eminem, and Johnny Cash.

This girl is a bad attitude kind of girl. She's not the kind of chick that is into anything girly.

She would go to many metal concerts, whether they're club, auditorium, arena, stadium, or festival. She owns thousands of CDs, cassettes, and vinyls in her collection, to support all her beloved bands. She loves wearing leather jackets, as well as t-shirts representing her favorite bands, other such outfits. She has two different professions: Working at a guitar store and drawing album covers.

She also has many different hobbies. She's also a gamer, and games she likes to play are first-person shooters, survival horror games, as well as other games like GTA, Diablo, and Mortal Kombat. She likes to work out, as well as doing some modelling. Her favorite sport to watch is mixed martial arts. She's also into gore and hardcore porn. She even likes hanging out with other metal chicks, as well as punks and goths. She also has interests for other things such as movies (specially horror), literature, art, television, anime, manga, cartoons, comics, etc.

This is the kind of metal chick that you cannot resist.

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Response to Character description: Metal chick Feb. 23rd, 2013 @ 07:39 PM Reply

Too simulated and unrealistic. Too specific in places it shouldn't be. Too chimeric, almost vicarious. Finally, too personal, if you are going to present her to the reader.

What is this for?


Despite the name, I'm actually good--Deft, and good!

Giving out reviews to anyone who wants them (exception: poems. I'll find you).

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Response to Character description: Metal chick Feb. 25th, 2013 @ 02:37 PM Reply

What is this? I don't get its purpose. The comment above me is spot on. This person is too unreal. Your perfect girl? Whatever it is, it doesn't work. Everyone has flaws and it's the flaws that make the character an individual who is interesting.

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Response to Character description: Metal chick Feb. 25th, 2013 @ 09:24 PM Reply

Ehhh... this character description doesn't seem well rounded enough, doesn't seem quite right. This character needs more broadening, more development and more realism, etc.


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